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So Long
your chance to win my love has passed
and I say so long at last
now, I wouldn't give you the time of day
not even if you asked.
and I say so long at last
now, I wouldn't give you the time of day
not even if you asked.
Published 18th Sep 2020
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Written for the Goodbyes like competition.
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2020 12:21pm
LOL Not only does this not pull any punches, it flows perfectly.
18th Sep 2020 12:25pm
18th Sep 2020 1:02pm
But what if I asked for the time the bus was leaving? (Smile). As usual a great and to the point write. Peace. oral
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