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Between the Deep and Me
death on the shore
under the full Hunter’s moon,
my fight, a trophy
in your chest pocket
as you leave me for high tide;
there’s nothing now
between the deep and me,
save a few stars standing
in my way
under the full Hunter’s moon,
my fight, a trophy
in your chest pocket
as you leave me for high tide;
there’s nothing now
between the deep and me,
save a few stars standing
in my way
Written by
LunaGreyhawk
Published 15th Sep 2020
Author's Note
Written for the ‘Dark’ Minimalist competition.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Between the Deep and Me
15th Sep 2020 5:42pm
Re. Between the Deep and Me
15th Sep 2020 6:18pm
Re. Between the Deep and Me
15th Sep 2020 11:01pm
Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
16th Sep 2020 00:06am
Depression is a bitch. Thank you for your kind words, and thank you so much for reading 💜.
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- Edited 23rd Sep 2020 6:45pm
15th Sep 2020 11:13pm
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
16th Sep 2020 00:07am
Re. Between the Deep and Me
17th Sep 2020 3:47am
Beautiful, with a kind of surrender about it, somehow, like being washed away by the tide.
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
17th Sep 2020 4:15am
I’ve learned that in some ways, surrendering to the inevitable is the only way through it. Thank you, Daniel 💜.
Re. Between the Deep and Me
17th Sep 2020 5:54am
Dear L,
Exhaling a very long sigh. You’ve said it all. There is a sweet release in death taking over until it passes and other thoughts take hold. Wishing you all the best in the comp. H🌷
Exhaling a very long sigh. You’ve said it all. There is a sweet release in death taking over until it passes and other thoughts take hold. Wishing you all the best in the comp. H🌷
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
17th Sep 2020 5:55am
Re. Between the Deep and Me
18th Sep 2020 5:55pm
Echo the previous comments... Lots of emotion in this one. Very good writing, Luna... 🙏
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
18th Sep 2020 5:56pm
Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
18th Sep 2020 6:00pm
I haven't read as much of your poetry as I feel I should... I'm pretty behind on my writing at the moment, but you are one of the most talented writers here, in my honest opinion. Keep up the great writing... :)
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
18th Sep 2020 6:02pm
Re. Between the Deep and Me
20th Sep 2020 9:01am
That's why we write, Moonspirit. Create vast chapters and be far more than anyone else's story.
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
20th Sep 2020 9:02pm