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Between the Deep and Me
death on the shore
under the full Hunter’s moon,
my fight, a trophy
in your chest pocket
as you leave me for high tide;
there’s nothing now
between the deep and me,
save a few stars standing
in my way
under the full Hunter’s moon,
my fight, a trophy
in your chest pocket
as you leave me for high tide;
there’s nothing now
between the deep and me,
save a few stars standing
in my way
Written by
LunaGreyhawk
(Jenn_Leigh)
Published 15th Sep 2020
Author's Note
Written for the ‘Dark’ Minimalist competition.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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comments 16
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Re. Between the Deep and Me
15th Sep 2020 5:42pm
Re. Between the Deep and Me
15th Sep 2020 6:18pm
Re. Between the Deep and Me
15th Sep 2020 11:01pm
Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
16th Sep 2020 00:06am
Depression is a bitch. Thank you for your kind words, and thank you so much for reading 💜.
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
16th Sep 2020 00:07am
Re. Between the Deep and Me
17th Sep 2020 3:47am
Beautiful, with a kind of surrender about it, somehow, like being washed away by the tide.
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
17th Sep 2020 4:15am
I’ve learned that in some ways, surrendering to the inevitable is the only way through it. Thank you, Daniel 💜.
Re. Between the Deep and Me
17th Sep 2020 5:54am
Dear L,
Exhaling a very long sigh. You’ve said it all. There is a sweet release in death taking over until it passes and other thoughts take hold. Wishing you all the best in the comp. H🌷
Exhaling a very long sigh. You’ve said it all. There is a sweet release in death taking over until it passes and other thoughts take hold. Wishing you all the best in the comp. H🌷
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
17th Sep 2020 5:55am
Re. Between the Deep and Me
18th Sep 2020 5:55pm
Echo the previous comments... Lots of emotion in this one. Very good writing, Luna... 🙏
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
18th Sep 2020 5:56pm
Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
18th Sep 2020 6:00pm
I haven't read as much of your poetry as I feel I should... I'm pretty behind on my writing at the moment, but you are one of the most talented writers here, in my honest opinion. Keep up the great writing... :)
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Re: Re. Between the Deep and Me
18th Sep 2020 6:02pm
Re. Between the Deep and Me
20th Sep 2020 9:01am
That's why we write, Moonspirit. Create vast chapters and be far more than anyone else's story.
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20th Sep 2020 9:02pm