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Joined at the hip (tanka)
Words carved on headstone
: missing shoe one of a pair
strife cant be appeased
just limping on , broken down
my inconsolable loss:
: missing shoe one of a pair
strife cant be appeased
just limping on , broken down
my inconsolable loss:
Published 12th Sep 2020
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2020 12:49pm
Slip, I love that you used the word "inconsolable" in a poem involving a missing shoe. Genius.
12th Sep 2020 3:36pm
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