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Death Song Saved to Voicemail
never said goodbye
you called me that night, singing
happened so damned fast
I never answered the phone
your death song saved to voicemail
you called me that night, singing
happened so damned fast
I never answered the phone
your death song saved to voicemail
Published 11th Sep 2020
Author's Note
Written for the Goodbyes, Like... contest.
For Brenda: I still miss you every day.
For Brenda: I still miss you every day.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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11th Sep 2020 4:06pm
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
11th Sep 2020 9:27pm
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12th Sep 2020 7:08am
Dear L,
Still trying to catch my breath. The level of emotions that go along with this piece are cavernous.
Wishing you the best for the comp. H🌷
Still trying to catch my breath. The level of emotions that go along with this piece are cavernous.
Wishing you the best for the comp. H🌷
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Sep 2020 2:45pm
13th Sep 2020 1:02am
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13th Sep 2020 6:48pm
Powerful in its economy, which is starkly vivid and full of subtly stated emotion and ghosts of unspoken stories. Amazing work.
Something you can hang onto. What final breath expressed. Better that than a death text. Song is one way to clear life's debt
22nd Sep 2020 7:21pm
Heartwrenching and filled with regret. I'm sorry for your loss, Luna... 💔. This one cuts like a knife
1st Feb 2024 00:05am
A powerful piece. To the point and the wording is deep. Nicely executed.
