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Song For An Eager Soul
Inside,
grows a frightening calm,
passive, beneath
remnants of lavendar
severed, hung to dry.
I am
the mountain eroded,
worn, emotions jutting
upwards, I am dissolved for preservation
Discolored beams
mirror the clouds,
torn by the echo of
my eager soul.
Psychotic voices drip
into recesses of an unwell mind that waits
Across my face lines
tell a tale of the acacia that weeps.
Its yellow flowers grafted in roots stretch wide against the mossy surface of my mind
With admiration I welcome the touch
Herbs that grow in bunches that sway gently
Like bouquets unearthed with nowhere to go but
to live inside of me
There they will last forever
Dried, within the
confines of my heart
grows a frightening calm,
passive, beneath
remnants of lavendar
severed, hung to dry.
I am
the mountain eroded,
worn, emotions jutting
upwards, I am dissolved for preservation
Discolored beams
mirror the clouds,
torn by the echo of
my eager soul.
Psychotic voices drip
into recesses of an unwell mind that waits
Across my face lines
tell a tale of the acacia that weeps.
Its yellow flowers grafted in roots stretch wide against the mossy surface of my mind
With admiration I welcome the touch
Herbs that grow in bunches that sway gently
Like bouquets unearthed with nowhere to go but
to live inside of me
There they will last forever
Dried, within the
confines of my heart
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Re. Song For An Eager Soul
8th Sep 2020 4:29am
This is a beautiful self-reflection with such riveting metaphors my poetess, very nicely composed
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8th Sep 2020 4:37am
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8th Sep 2020 6:29am
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8th Sep 2020 10:21am
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8th Sep 2020 9:36pm
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8th Sep 2020 10:00pm
No actually I'm in a really good place right now comfortable in my skin
I have been penning alot of dark lonely pieces
It must be something someone needs to hear
I feel a transition to move forward towards acceptance
My work is a mission meant to affect others I'm following the path
I have been penning alot of dark lonely pieces
It must be something someone needs to hear
I feel a transition to move forward towards acceptance
My work is a mission meant to affect others I'm following the path
Re. Song For An Eager Soul
8th Sep 2020 10:09pm
Re: Re. Song For An Eager Soul
8th Sep 2020 10:16pm
Oh thank you so much that means allot How about a secret code to let you know everything's alright ( yeah a secret code publicly posted) how about a 🖤
That means no worries my friend
But you can enquire of me anytime
That means no worries my friend
But you can enquire of me anytime
Re. Song For An Eager Soul
How about, "I'm fine" & feck the code, otherwise we could be straying into that honeybun stuff by way of code... possibly? 😉
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8th Sep 2020 10:24pm
🖤love it fuck the code your so coarse Billy
Honey bun shit code (Lol)
Have a fken beautiful day Billy
Honey bun shit code (Lol)
Have a fken beautiful day Billy
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9th Sep 2020 9:44pm
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9th Sep 2020 11:15pm
Re. Song For An Eager Soul
How about we learn & communicate in morse code? I know it's a bit 1912 but it still holds up today
(I think).
(I think).
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Re: Re. Song For An Eager Soul
10th Sep 2020 2:03am
How would we go about doing that the periods after the sentence you can count haha
I'm fine
But you can still msg me anytime
I'm fine
But you can still msg me anytime
Re. Song For An Eager Soul
We would need an instruction manual for sure but it's not like it's high pressure, like on RMS Titanic.
"I told you, go back down the main stairwell!" That would be me OR "You'll have to pay for that, you know, that's White Star line property!" "SHUT UP!" That would be me too, lol. Not sure what this has to do with your poem, so I will shut the f*** up now honey. Was just trying to be funny, seeking a little attention. ;-)
"I told you, go back down the main stairwell!" That would be me OR "You'll have to pay for that, you know, that's White Star line property!" "SHUT UP!" That would be me too, lol. Not sure what this has to do with your poem, so I will shut the f*** up now honey. Was just trying to be funny, seeking a little attention. ;-)
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Re: Re. Song For An Eager Soul
13th Sep 2020 4:26am
Thank you so much
It can be draining to write a piece such as this I thank you for your comment
It can be draining to write a piece such as this I thank you for your comment
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30th Sep 2020 00:08am