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There's something about Emily
The light fragrance wafting out
as she brushes her long hair
or the look of mischief in her eyes
when she strides over
Or the way her denim skirt
rides up past the hemline of her tights
showing just enough curve
to warm the blood
or the attention of her lips
and her fingers as they move constant
Or the rise and fall of her breasts
and the subtle crack of vertebrae
as she arches her back
and bites her bottom lip
Or the lightening when her nails
dig into My shoulders
and she pulls me in tight
or the way her heels press hard
against the small of my back
and her pupils dilate
as the soft tone of her moan
goes back deep down into her being
and changes into a full primal scream
There's something about Emily
she draws out the beast with ease
rushes my blood and sets me free
and makes me so damn eager to please
as she brushes her long hair
or the look of mischief in her eyes
when she strides over
Or the way her denim skirt
rides up past the hemline of her tights
showing just enough curve
to warm the blood
or the attention of her lips
and her fingers as they move constant
Or the rise and fall of her breasts
and the subtle crack of vertebrae
as she arches her back
and bites her bottom lip
Or the lightening when her nails
dig into My shoulders
and she pulls me in tight
or the way her heels press hard
against the small of my back
and her pupils dilate
as the soft tone of her moan
goes back deep down into her being
and changes into a full primal scream
There's something about Emily
she draws out the beast with ease
rushes my blood and sets me free
and makes me so damn eager to please
Written by
lepperochan
(Craic-Dealer)
Published 27th Jan 2012
| Edited 30th Jan 2012
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Emily
27th Jan 2012 3:10am
GOD EAMON!
You are just incredibly miraculous.
This was beautiful, made me bit my lip.
You are just incredibly miraculous.
This was beautiful, made me bit my lip.
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re: Emily
27th Jan 2012 11:55am
Adele.
hope your lip is ok :)
thanks for your wonderful praise and encouragement
hope your lip is ok :)
thanks for your wonderful praise and encouragement
Enjoyed
Anonymous
27th Jan 2012 3:17am
"There's something about Emily
she draws out the beast with ease
rushes my blood and sets me free
and makes me so damn eager to please" well that just says it all doesn't it Eamon?
she draws out the beast with ease
rushes my blood and sets me free
and makes me so damn eager to please" well that just says it all doesn't it Eamon?
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re: Enjoyed
27th Jan 2012 11:57am
mememe,
i agree, it certainly says a lot :)
thanks for stopping by this little number and throwing down your thoughts.
i agree, it certainly says a lot :)
thanks for stopping by this little number and throwing down your thoughts.
LA
27th Jan 2012 7:02am
Superb Eamon, loved it. It was expressive, interesting and calm throughout.
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re: LA
27th Jan 2012 12:00pm
LA,
thanks, i figured after 300 days here i should at least try and write an erotica.
so glad it sat well with you.
thanks, i figured after 300 days here i should at least try and write an erotica.
so glad it sat well with you.
Class .
Anonymous
27th Jan 2012 9:07am
You know Eamon.
This piece is pure class man...
that soft style is erotic in itself, not to mention the wonderful imagery and emotional wording.
Nice man...
Al.
This piece is pure class man...
that soft style is erotic in itself, not to mention the wonderful imagery and emotional wording.
Nice man...
Al.
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re: Class .
27th Jan 2012 12:03pm
Al,
well how the hell are you?
praise indeed man, thanks for that.
mucho appreciated.
thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.
well how the hell are you?
praise indeed man, thanks for that.
mucho appreciated.
thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.
:)
27th Jan 2012 12:43pm
Eamo
My man!:)
The second-fourth-fifth stanza.
Lightening was a blitkreig.
Unusual and unexpected.
Vertebrae was brilliant.
Very tangible and real.
It's fine piece of clean erotica.
Smiling,
S'
p.s-Just wanted to know
if calf's was intentional?
I feel it is. But then, me..:D
My man!:)
The second-fourth-fifth stanza.
Lightening was a blitkreig.
Unusual and unexpected.
Vertebrae was brilliant.
Very tangible and real.
It's fine piece of clean erotica.
Smiling,
S'
p.s-Just wanted to know
if calf's was intentional?
I feel it is. But then, me..:D
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re: :)
27th Jan 2012 1:36pm
Sumeet,
Well thanks for those generous words of praise .
Deeply honoured man.
Calf's was intentional though thinking about it now I think I might change it up a little.
Thanks
Well thanks for those generous words of praise .
Deeply honoured man.
Calf's was intentional though thinking about it now I think I might change it up a little.
Thanks
Finally Eamon
27th Jan 2012 1:25pm
I broke out my tissue to wipe my tears.
You did it. Now that wasn't so bad was it?
Cheers
You did it. Now that wasn't so bad was it?
Cheers
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re: Finally Eamon
27th Jan 2012 1:49pm
Kym
Funny you should say that as I broke out the tissues myself just after writing this number .......
Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts
Funny you should say that as I broke out the tissues myself just after writing this number .......
Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts
Something About
27th Jan 2012 9:42pm
re: Something About
27th Jan 2012 10:35pm
mr harlequin
thank you sir, i see your salute and raise you a tip of the hat.
thank you sir, i see your salute and raise you a tip of the hat.
re: re: Something About
28th Jan 2012 00:32am
and my hat also to you sir, for the stories of the heart cannot be told often enough?
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re: comment
29th Jan 2012 2:48pm
Ophie
you are far too kind.
thank you for dropping by and speaking the truth :)
you are far too kind.
thank you for dropping by and speaking the truth :)
:]
30th Jan 2012 3:48am
I loved it man,, you have the wonderful gift of giving people pictures from words, and i really admire that. Amazing. Loved it.
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re: :]
30th Jan 2012 4:31am
Kristian,
Thanks for reading this little number and leaving your thoughts .
Welcome to DU
Thanks for reading this little number and leaving your thoughts .
Welcome to DU
:)
30th Jan 2012 11:23am
Oh damn
25th Feb 2012 6:10am
See I am a soft porn girl. Always have been, always will be. This leaves so much to the imagination. I wonder what she looks like, you get where I'm going I'm sure. It's great for real. I loved it .. Like a romance novel perfect. *****
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re: Oh damn
25th Feb 2012 6:35am
well thank you Gg
she looks good.
very happy you liked it we should swap soft porn movies some time :)
just joking ...kind of
happy you stopped by .
she looks good.
very happy you liked it we should swap soft porn movies some time :)
just joking ...kind of
happy you stopped by .
Emily
Anonymous
26th Feb 2012 12:54pm
Ah yes. Subtle femininity. Where you succeed and I often fail :)
This was beautiful. And it built throughout to a wonderful end. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
This was beautiful. And it built throughout to a wonderful end. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
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re: Emily
27th Feb 2012 6:14am
Thanks lots, miss-sub
Subtle was what i was trying for so i'm glad it worked out.
Cheers for stopping by and throwing down your thoughts.
Subtle was what i was trying for so i'm glad it worked out.
Cheers for stopping by and throwing down your thoughts.
...
Anonymous
16th Mar 2012 6:36am
Holy shit! This is the best erotic poem I've ever read..because I found my own Emily. Haha! Thanks bud, now I'm off to read it again!
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re: ...
16th Mar 2012 11:55am
Çhameleon man,
Good that you found your own Emily , maybe now you can keep your filthy hands off mine. :)
No.
But yep. Emily's are special and should be treated
with the upmost care and attentions. :)
Thanks for your stopping by and sharing your thoughts
Chameleon.
Good that you found your own Emily , maybe now you can keep your filthy hands off mine. :)
No.
But yep. Emily's are special and should be treated
with the upmost care and attentions. :)
Thanks for your stopping by and sharing your thoughts
Chameleon.
Re: There's something about Emily
22nd May 2013 2:22am
Oh my!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn!!!!!!!!Damn!!!!!!!!!!Damn!!!!!!!!!!!
SO DAMN GOOD!!!
Damn!!!!!!!!Damn!!!!!!!!!!Damn!!!!!!!!!!!
SO DAMN GOOD!!!
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re: Re: There's something about Emily
22nd May 2013 2:39am
Tommie
I'll take that comment as a nod of approval :)
one of these days you'll be screaming that to me for real. ...don't fight it Tommie ..resistance is futile.
Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.
I'll take that comment as a nod of approval :)
one of these days you'll be screaming that to me for real. ...don't fight it Tommie ..resistance is futile.
Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.
re: re: Re: There's something about Emily
22nd May 2013 4:17am
Re. There's something about Emily
28th Sep 2015 2:39am
Re: Re. There's something about Emily
5th Mar 2016 12:05pm
Thank you, Miss Jackson
and thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts
(sorry it took long for me to reply )
and thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts
(sorry it took long for me to reply )
Re. There's something about Emily
1st Mar 2016 8:20pm
Easy to visualise her clothed and, later in poem, in bed with the narrator.
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Re: Re. There's something about Emily
5th Mar 2016 12:09pm
Solomon song
thanks for visiting. this the only erotic I have posted into my catalogue. I found it hard enough (pun intended)
anyhow cheers for your thoughts. you're very welcome here
thanks for visiting. this the only erotic I have posted into my catalogue. I found it hard enough (pun intended)
anyhow cheers for your thoughts. you're very welcome here