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cheers.
Darkly sparse rhetoric
whistling through smoke
here we are together
here we've come alone
Silently drinking songs
of dissonance and hope
our bellies are empty
but our hearts are full
We raise our glasses to
the absurdity of truth
we may be tired but
we are tried and true
With dirt on our hands
and a conscience clean
our sins are many
but still we sing
whistling through smoke
here we are together
here we've come alone
Silently drinking songs
of dissonance and hope
our bellies are empty
but our hearts are full
We raise our glasses to
the absurdity of truth
we may be tired but
we are tried and true
With dirt on our hands
and a conscience clean
our sins are many
but still we sing
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22nd Aug 2020 3:14am
I feel like this is one of those things that your best friends all memorize and you stand around, arms on shoulders and around necks, and slur together and mean every damn word. Well done.
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22nd Aug 2020 3:18am
Thank you! I couldn't decide on the title. I flip flopped between "cheers." and "dirt".
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22nd Aug 2020 5:26am
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22nd Aug 2020 6:00pm
This is the appreciation between those who hardly have a thing but love between them. I know its tune well, having grown up in part poor as a church mouse, yet it was the happiest of times.
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26th Aug 2020 2:24pm
Dear BF,
Wonderfully reminiscent of less intrusive times and community spirit. “ Silently drinking songs
of dissonance and hope
our bellies are empty
but our hearts are full “ beautiful stanza. H🌷
Wonderfully reminiscent of less intrusive times and community spirit. “ Silently drinking songs
of dissonance and hope
our bellies are empty
but our hearts are full “ beautiful stanza. H🌷
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27th Aug 2020 10:44pm
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2020 00:34am
Bruised.. excellent.. you the man.. you're pic reminds me of a young, Paul Stanley.. but you supply better ink..
Dave
Dave
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30th Aug 2020 00:49am
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26th Sep 2020 1:47am
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23rd Jun 2024 11:50pm
how profound with you edge lord heinous idea of profane speech.
cum suck god?
do you know.. what ambrosia is...nd the use of tht...particularly poignant potion?
its the seminal and vaginal fluid form a shared simultaneous orgasm.
its shared in a Eucharist to the same gestalt that propelled the oracle of Delphi
cum suck god?
do you know.. what ambrosia is...nd the use of tht...particularly poignant potion?
its the seminal and vaginal fluid form a shared simultaneous orgasm.
its shared in a Eucharist to the same gestalt that propelled the oracle of Delphi
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13th Apr 2023 12:35pm
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