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A Crack
a slit, a crack
a cave's soft crevice,
penetrating -
growing and swelling
sensations upwelling
while sliding deep within-
a slippery slope
in which to poke,
with such a beautiful view
with expectations
of new sensations
inside me and you-
as liquid sound
by movement found
becomes a growing tide
moist and warm
where senses swarm
buzzing deep inside
the slippery slope
in which I poke
while penetrating
your slit, your crack
your cave's soft crevice,
the way to go within -
a cave's soft crevice,
penetrating -
growing and swelling
sensations upwelling
while sliding deep within-
a slippery slope
in which to poke,
with such a beautiful view
with expectations
of new sensations
inside me and you-
as liquid sound
by movement found
becomes a growing tide
moist and warm
where senses swarm
buzzing deep inside
the slippery slope
in which I poke
while penetrating
your slit, your crack
your cave's soft crevice,
the way to go within -
Published 21st Aug 2020
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21st Aug 2020 8:07am
21st Aug 2020 5:11pm
21st Aug 2020 8:43am
Would echo jenny - love the rhyme, which could be read quickly but clearly. Just thought this rhyme on same theme:
Your crack's for filling,
if you are willing
to take my shilling.
Once you've got spilling
it will be thrilling
and most fulfilling.
Your crack's for filling,
if you are willing
to take my shilling.
Once you've got spilling
it will be thrilling
and most fulfilling.
21st Aug 2020 5:12pm
