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Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
Butterfly wings
Honey bee stings
On violin strings,
a strange harmony
I sought peace
infinite faith
in the
Peace of hovering
Among empty days,
my troubles
remained somewhere
in the distance
Balance of strength
I got drunk
on pure feelings
Connected thinking,
harmony of our bodies
and connections
Our inner forces
beautiful piercing
We are connected,
you are the line
inscribed in my palm
You are the one
I have been waiting
for so long
that is the connection,
in your embrace
You open the world to me,
I feel it with you now
and the eyes say it
We share the world
like oxygen and air
I have faith
we are heading for
the stars together
It's a strange dream
where I'm not just
the one
whose songs drift on
delicate colorful wings
On the way
to new heights
our heart rate will rise
I will whisper to you
in secret
Connected thinking,
harmony of bodies
and connections,
our inner forces
a beautiful piercing
We are forever connected
Sincere love
night and dawn
I will be your verse
and
You can be my poem
We are connected
no matter what happens
That's the connection
in your embrace
you can always
count on my support
And if we drift away
I am forever your support
and balance
Honey bee stings
On violin strings,
a strange harmony
I sought peace
infinite faith
in the
Peace of hovering
Among empty days,
my troubles
remained somewhere
in the distance
Balance of strength
I got drunk
on pure feelings
Connected thinking,
harmony of our bodies
and connections
Our inner forces
beautiful piercing
We are connected,
you are the line
inscribed in my palm
You are the one
I have been waiting
for so long
that is the connection,
in your embrace
You open the world to me,
I feel it with you now
and the eyes say it
We share the world
like oxygen and air
I have faith
we are heading for
the stars together
It's a strange dream
where I'm not just
the one
whose songs drift on
delicate colorful wings
On the way
to new heights
our heart rate will rise
I will whisper to you
in secret
Connected thinking,
harmony of bodies
and connections,
our inner forces
a beautiful piercing
We are forever connected
Sincere love
night and dawn
I will be your verse
and
You can be my poem
We are connected
no matter what happens
That's the connection
in your embrace
you can always
count on my support
And if we drift away
I am forever your support
and balance
Author's Note
I recorded this a while back when I did the first audio experiment and never posted it. Not sure why I am now :) but here it is since I already have it. (Still not planning any more of these)
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Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
20th Aug 2020 00:18am
Such a captivating, self assured voice❣❣ Your soul is overflowing with romance. It spills on the page with exciting passages like,
"you are the line
inscribed in my palm
You are the one
I have been waiting
for so long"
One of my favorite passages, of course any mention of music get my heart-felt endorsement,
"It's a strange dream
where I'm not just
the one
whose songs drift on
delicate colorful wings"
Bravisimma BD❣❣🌹
"you are the line
inscribed in my palm
You are the one
I have been waiting
for so long"
One of my favorite passages, of course any mention of music get my heart-felt endorsement,
"It's a strange dream
where I'm not just
the one
whose songs drift on
delicate colorful wings"
Bravisimma BD❣❣🌹
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
20th Aug 2020 9:04pm
Not so sure about the self assured. ;) Thanks for the comment and compliment. I am really glad you liked it. :) That second part is one of my favorites also.
Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
20th Aug 2020 3:00am
I thought this was a great read, and your voice presents well.
In the spirit of honest critique, the style and pace of the music didn’t match the beauty of the written and spoken words. Perhaps try it without the music.
In the spirit of honest critique, the style and pace of the music didn’t match the beauty of the written and spoken words. Perhaps try it without the music.
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
20th Aug 2020 9:05pm
Thanks RPM for the comment and feedback. I really appreciate your honesty, I was lazy with the music since it was the music that accompanied the royalty/copyright free video so there really was no thought in it at all. I will look at possibly stripping it out and see how that goes. :)
Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
20th Aug 2020 6:34am
Dear K,
To me, this was a beautifully connected stream of conscious that was full of lovely places and things to enjoy with someone who would appreciate them with you. What I find so sweet is the pledge of loving friendship you close with if things don’t remain on an amorous platform. Beautiful write. H🌷
To me, this was a beautifully connected stream of conscious that was full of lovely places and things to enjoy with someone who would appreciate them with you. What I find so sweet is the pledge of loving friendship you close with if things don’t remain on an amorous platform. Beautiful write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
20th Aug 2020 9:06pm
Thanks for the comment, feedback, and compliment Honoria. I always love hearing from you and I hope you are having a great summer. 💖
Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
20th Aug 2020 4:00pm
Your elocution is improving just as your written voice. It's great to witness. Remember to take your time, emphasis on the words. Great work!
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
20th Aug 2020 9:10pm
Thanks for the feedback and compliment Daniel. I really appreciate your guidance on this a lot. :)
Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
1st Sep 2020 00:58am
Loved the confidence and projection in your voice. The visuals are stunning and colorful in all it's nature.
Bravo Kristina, stunning work.
Bravo Kristina, stunning work.
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
1st Sep 2020 9:24pm
Thanks for the really beautiful comment and compliment Wallyroo. That really made me feel good. ❤️
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (Audio)
2nd Sep 2020 9:08pm
Thanks for the comment and compliment Tim. I am really glad you liked it. ❤️
Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
5th Dec 2020 2:46am
Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
5th Dec 2020 3:03pm
Thank you so much for the comment, your continued support and encouragement. I appreciate it a lot. ❤️
Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
KX This exquisite enchanting poem is a metaphoric masterpiece portraying your understanding of endless love...... '' you are the line
inscribed in my palm'' is an impactful ingenious way to describe an indelible future together (a fortune tell).....simply Beautiful..... from your written words to your lips adds a wonderful authenticity to your fantastic descriptive display of harmony and love. A great read and listen!!!!
inscribed in my palm'' is an impactful ingenious way to describe an indelible future together (a fortune tell).....simply Beautiful..... from your written words to your lips adds a wonderful authenticity to your fantastic descriptive display of harmony and love. A great read and listen!!!!
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, continued support and encouragement. I had this one hidden and when I decided to make visible again yesterday I did not expect anyone to ever come back to it. :) But your words have made me think that maybe it was worthwhile. And you identified one of my favorite lines as well. ;) I am truly humbled by your words. You definitely had me at " metaphoric masterpiece portraying your understanding of endless love" 💖
Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
5th Dec 2020 12:19pm
Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
5th Dec 2020 3:17pm
You are far to good to me Faith. I am honored by your words and continued support. You are a truly beautiful person, I only wish I could write something worthy of you. Lately, I have not found the inspiration to write anything I feel worth posting. Anyway, thank you so much for the WOWs. 💖
Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
I really like the following passage:
"We are forever connected
Sincere love
night and dawn
I will be your verse
and
You can be my poem ..."
... ... ...
"We are forever connected
Sincere love
night and dawn
I will be your verse
and
You can be my poem ..."
... ... ...
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
10th Dec 2020 3:45pm
Thank you so much for the comment, Marks. Those are some of my favorite lines as well. :) 💖
Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
11th Dec 2020 00:09am
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Re: Re. Peace in Hovering (+Reading)
7th Feb 2021 9:32pm
I always love getting a Wow! :) Ah, some of my favorite lines as well. I really appreciate your reads and comments so much. This was a little different and fun to write for me although it kind of just spilled out like usual. I consider it more poetic than many of my others. Your support and appreciation is amazing! Thank you so much.