deepundergroundpoetry.com
Inner Voice (Negative)
An angel appeared to me in a dream
And in the prose of my inner voice
She told me to follow him, my destiny
So faith became my compass
And the darkness faded away
The radiance of light suddenly
appeared to me
You appeared like a gift
Like a conductor of her grace
Darling, you're my antidote
Melt me in your arms
My desire for love, also my curse
But I pray to you - don't let me
lose her guidance and direction
You are my destiny
Dreams fall to the floor when
I surrender my will, into a
destructive captivity
My soul split, the voices of a demon
Drawing me deeper into this abuse
And what did I get in return,
having been taken to the depths
Misled by a fallen angel, my faith
and destiny was only a nightmare
A disgraceful poison feeding
my curse
The strongest affliction,
a dying soul
Truly exciting elixir for the evil
desires of a demon, destroy the
innocent
Dissecting my destiny, surgery
to remove the most beautiful
parts of me
And deliver them to hell
Where I will suffer an eternity
You melt me into your will,
My desire for love, my curse;
I pray, please remove this curse
And in the prose of my inner voice
She told me to follow him, my destiny
So faith became my compass
And the darkness faded away
The radiance of light suddenly
appeared to me
You appeared like a gift
Like a conductor of her grace
Darling, you're my antidote
Melt me in your arms
My desire for love, also my curse
But I pray to you - don't let me
lose her guidance and direction
You are my destiny
Dreams fall to the floor when
I surrender my will, into a
destructive captivity
My soul split, the voices of a demon
Drawing me deeper into this abuse
And what did I get in return,
having been taken to the depths
Misled by a fallen angel, my faith
and destiny was only a nightmare
A disgraceful poison feeding
my curse
The strongest affliction,
a dying soul
Truly exciting elixir for the evil
desires of a demon, destroy the
innocent
Dissecting my destiny, surgery
to remove the most beautiful
parts of me
And deliver them to hell
Where I will suffer an eternity
You melt me into your will,
My desire for love, my curse;
I pray, please remove this curse
Published 17th Aug 2020
Author's Note
Inner Voice - Negative Version
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 1
comments 2
reads 620
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
19th Aug 2020 6:12am
Dear Kristina, this is a poignant contrast to your positive version. With this passage I identify closely. "I surrender my will, into a destructive captivity" If ever I engage in destructive behavior it's usually due my lack of will power.
It's truly sad to observe when the beautiful elements of any being are taken due to evil doing of either the self or others. This passage describes that sad state
"surgery to remove the most beautiful parts of me"
It's truly sad to observe when the beautiful elements of any being are taken due to evil doing of either the self or others. This passage describes that sad state
"surgery to remove the most beautiful parts of me"
19th Aug 2020 9:15pm
Thanks for the comment GW, it was meant to be in stark contrast to the positive one and represent how sometimes relationships start off good but develop into something entirely different leading to abuse, jealousy, control, lying, cheating, and feeling trapped. Maybe something a little lighter of a subject next time. :)
