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Double D's
He was lost in the dark
she gave him a flashlight,
he took the batteries out
gave them to her and left.
She's still miffed.
she gave him a flashlight,
he took the batteries out
gave them to her and left.
She's still miffed.
Published 8th Aug 2020
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Wow ... this one jolted ... first the title hooked me ... then made me blush for my initial thoughts ... the poem make my mind consider/reconsider ... I understanding her miffing ... but then began to realize ... what she could do with those DDs ...
8th Aug 2020 7:44am
Different situations different responses... reaction is so personal., neither ended up with what was intended. Miffed, probably an understatement 🤣💕💕
8th Aug 2020 12:30pm
Dear N,
Well. Isn’t he an idiot! I love where this piece can guide whoever reads it to their own conclusion. Absolutely genius!
H🌷
Well. Isn’t he an idiot! I love where this piece can guide whoever reads it to their own conclusion. Absolutely genius!
H🌷
8th Aug 2020 3:39pm
8th Aug 2020 8:53pm
9th Aug 2020 3:17am
So many so unaware of what they need often settle for double d's? ... Well ... Still idiots ... good write ... Bless and love ... ..
Sounds like a gentleman to me... why does this poem make me feel nervous? Ahem... clever subject... cool art too.
