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Perpetual Spring
I awoke on a dewy morning, still enclosed,
shuddering and fearful of nature's breath.
Yet rain and breezes cooled my stems
and brought upon a refreshing caress
to open the blooms I deemed unsightly.
And no longer desiring a life of enclosure,
I turned at last to face the sun,
to wash my face with light and air,
and stand amongst the breathing flora
as a creature of boundless radiance,
refusing to be muted by the shade of trees,
nor to be trampled by careless feet,
alive at last in my perpetual Spring.
shuddering and fearful of nature's breath.
Yet rain and breezes cooled my stems
and brought upon a refreshing caress
to open the blooms I deemed unsightly.
And no longer desiring a life of enclosure,
I turned at last to face the sun,
to wash my face with light and air,
and stand amongst the breathing flora
as a creature of boundless radiance,
refusing to be muted by the shade of trees,
nor to be trampled by careless feet,
alive at last in my perpetual Spring.
Written by
MgAl
Published 1st Aug 2020
Author's Note
I wrote this on my birthday several years ago, during a particularly difficult year (my birthday is in September, so everything leading up to that month was stressful.) But for some reason, I awoke on this birthday, feeling renewed and thankful just to have made it that far.
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Re. Perpetual Spring
1st Aug 2020 8:48am
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Re. Perpetual Spring
1st Aug 2020 12:03pm
"to wash my face with light and air," that is such a beautiful line, and the whole thing is very beautiful.
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Re. Perpetual Spring
1st Aug 2020 2:58pm
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1st Aug 2020 5:41pm
This has been nominated for New Member of the Month:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11511/#492464
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11511/#492464
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1st Aug 2020 5:44pm
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Re. Perpetual Spring
4th Aug 2020 5:22am
nice flow
word to visual translation on point
I can see
pen is hot
poetic respect
word to visual translation on point
I can see
pen is hot
poetic respect
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Re. Perpetual Spring
11th Aug 2020 11:37pm
This is a beautiful piece. It's light and airy, giving it an easy flow. It was fantastic to read.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re. Perpetual Spring
Anonymous
28th Aug 2020 10:28pm
Keep it perpetual... (your writing) like it***
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