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Icarus And Achilles
I am falling
Just like Icarus
Flying
To close
To her sun
My wings burnt
Not my desire
She still
Draws me
To the fire
She is
My Achilles heel
The weak spot
In this heart
Of mine
Exuding
The Aphrodite
Within her
I come to worship
At beauty’s temple
Just like Icarus
Flying
To close
To her sun
My wings burnt
Not my desire
She still
Draws me
To the fire
She is
My Achilles heel
The weak spot
In this heart
Of mine
Exuding
The Aphrodite
Within her
I come to worship
At beauty’s temple
Published 31st Jul 2020
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31st Jul 2020 11:49am
I like the clever reference of these Greek mythological characters in your poem.
Fantastic piece. I enjoyed it.
Fantastic piece. I enjoyed it.
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Lol.. You!
**uses my "yes, I'm stubborn" smile again...
AP, trust me....
it's clever
*tips my hat in satisfying tip
**uses my "yes, I'm stubborn" smile again...
AP, trust me....
it's clever
*tips my hat in satisfying tip
