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Eyes Look Deep
Shrouded in mystery
A dark mistress
Feline eyes look deep
Delving through my soul
As if it where a book
Touching senses
I thought long dead
Her fire burning
Her heart thundering
It was a song known to me
Like she was always calling
But my being
Wasn’t quite tuned to the frequency
A siren enticing
To feel a thunderstorm of love
A dark mistress
Feline eyes look deep
Delving through my soul
As if it where a book
Touching senses
I thought long dead
Her fire burning
Her heart thundering
It was a song known to me
Like she was always calling
But my being
Wasn’t quite tuned to the frequency
A siren enticing
To feel a thunderstorm of love
Published 31st Jul 2020
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2020 4:45am
One lucky dark mistress
This is what a real poem looks like
(not a scribble)
and this is the emotion it's supposed to elicit
Beautiful and honest
Ty for sharing
As always, you set a high bar
This is what a real poem looks like
(not a scribble)
and this is the emotion it's supposed to elicit
Beautiful and honest
Ty for sharing
As always, you set a high bar
31st Jul 2020 5:11am
Far to kind as usual as I said before Skydancer sets the bar so Much higher
Anonymous
31st Jul 2020 5:16am
To each 'her' own- (meaning me and my opinion= staunch and stubborn)
Skydancer is incredible, no doubt.
Yours are too.
Skydancer is incredible, no doubt.
Yours are too.
31st Jul 2020 5:27am
Anonymous
31st Jul 2020 5:31am
Lol.
Danke
I like that we can both agree
that you're amazing .
Ty
Night. made.
I'll leave you be now, promise
(I'm annoying I know)
Danke
I like that we can both agree
that you're amazing .
Ty
Night. made.
I'll leave you be now, promise
(I'm annoying I know)
31st Jul 2020 6:41am
31st Jul 2020 9:08am
31st Jul 2020 7:33am
As usual, you have delivered another praiseworthy poem to your readers! Keep the great stuff coming! I'm loving it!
Faith
Faith
31st Jul 2020 8:16am
31st Jul 2020 10:13am
