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Hate
Hate the man living inside my skin.
The fucking sicko bastard poisons my soul.
His lecherous thoughts like putrid oil slicks on the pond of my mind.
Sniper rifle at the ready, 7.62 blowing relationships to hell and back.
Damm him for riding shotgun as I speed down the road, cajoling me ever faster.
His greed and avarice sucking me dry, pushing me over the cliff’s edge.
The stupid shit needs to leave the way he came in before I slit his throat and dump his ass in the gutter.
The fucking sicko bastard poisons my soul.
His lecherous thoughts like putrid oil slicks on the pond of my mind.
Sniper rifle at the ready, 7.62 blowing relationships to hell and back.
Damm him for riding shotgun as I speed down the road, cajoling me ever faster.
His greed and avarice sucking me dry, pushing me over the cliff’s edge.
The stupid shit needs to leave the way he came in before I slit his throat and dump his ass in the gutter.
Published 27th Jul 2020
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27th Jul 2020 4:00pm
Just breathe... deeply as you close your eyes and watch the pain and hate flow from your being into a rushing raging river that takes it all away downstream.
Don’t let the pain turn to hate as it’ll consume you from the inside out, like cancer !
May you find solace in healing the internal fractures that torment you; sooner, rather than later...🌹
Don’t let the pain turn to hate as it’ll consume you from the inside out, like cancer !
May you find solace in healing the internal fractures that torment you; sooner, rather than later...🌹
27th Jul 2020 4:05pm
Thank you for the kind words. I am actually in a much better place right now, but I have always written more dark and angry works than anything else.
Your concern and compassion touches me. I will remember your words when the demons come out.
Thank you for the read Shadow
Your concern and compassion touches me. I will remember your words when the demons come out.
Thank you for the read Shadow
8th Aug 2020 9:42pm
It almost feels wrong to like this poem, but it is such an powerful piece filled with emotion and I felt every bit of it. I believe we all fight an inner battle of some sort. In fact I still wrestle with my inner demons everyday, some are worse than others.
I just wanted to let you know that your words are heard and emotions are relatable.
Keep writing.
<3
Meganne
I just wanted to let you know that your words are heard and emotions are relatable.
Keep writing.
<3
Meganne
9th Aug 2020 2:27am
Thank you very much for your words of encouragement and understanding. I’m glad the poem had feeling for you. I appreciate you reading my work.
6th Sep 2020 4:07pm
This feeling? I believe we should embrace it, rage through it and send it on it's way when the worst of it has passed. Thank you for stringing together these words and putting it out there instead of sugar-coating it or hiding it. A powerful, relatable write.
6th Sep 2020 5:04pm
Thank yo for your insightful comments. I have discovered that accepting that he is part of me and as you say, raging through it, is the only way for a cathartic release. I am working him out of me as time passes by.
