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Re. The World Is Still Asleep
21st Jul 2020 11:10am
Liked your recognition of the weight of the moment. Could mean nothing or everything. Thanks for writing. A good way to begin my day.
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21st Jul 2020 3:23pm
Re. The World Is Still Asleep
21st Jul 2020 11:41pm
Hi Marina. I like the gentle gravity of your write, through it's organic observations, you allow the magic of life to come across. Nothing superfluous, proportional and sensitively rendered.
I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
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Re. The World Is Still Asleep
22nd Jul 2020 2:23am
Meaning Of Seeing Deer : Revelation = 602
Awareness = 602
In an ancient code I teach , 603 is a column of eight symbols...
Makes the shape of human skeletal / muscular system , adds to value for Blood...
And it is what we , of this Tradition , call the *Goddess* column...
Remember..."Awareness" is *not* "Consciousness"
It is *Body Feeling* oriented...and , in Native American
tradition , Deer is often associated with *Divine Love*...
Awareness = 602
In an ancient code I teach , 603 is a column of eight symbols...
Makes the shape of human skeletal / muscular system , adds to value for Blood...
And it is what we , of this Tradition , call the *Goddess* column...
Remember..."Awareness" is *not* "Consciousness"
It is *Body Feeling* oriented...and , in Native American
tradition , Deer is often associated with *Divine Love*...
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Re. The World Is Still Asleep
22nd Jul 2020 5:20am
Dear M,
I admire your appreciation of being in the moment during your morning revelation. It can be so easy to ignore the beauty of nature and take for granted its offerings. For me, I enjoyed the tranquility of the scene you’ve described. It had an amazing sense of calm to start the day. Lovely write. H🌷
I admire your appreciation of being in the moment during your morning revelation. It can be so easy to ignore the beauty of nature and take for granted its offerings. For me, I enjoyed the tranquility of the scene you’ve described. It had an amazing sense of calm to start the day. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. The World Is Still Asleep
22nd Jul 2020 10:10pm
Re. The World Is Still Asleep
22nd Jul 2020 6:23am
Great poem. I see the image of animals and nature which is cool. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. The World Is Still Asleep
22nd Jul 2020 10:11pm
Re. The World Is Still Asleep
22nd Jul 2020 9:25pm
The weight of the world can definitely be a heavy load to carry yet it is those silent moments alone within the universe were space has no idea of time respect dear poetess
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22nd Jul 2020 10:11pm
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23rd Jul 2020 11:29am