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You have me
Sometimes I lack immediate inspiration
I get lost in my thoughts and I just ask myself
why today's world works more on screen
And I am reminded how much I need you
That's why I'll take you into my loving arms
I perceive all your calm tones in every minute
and I tell you day after day how much
I love you
You got me, I got you, really
You are my happiness,
my endorphin and oxytocin
We are getting closer and closer
You hear my secret tones,
and have known for some time
Our hearts are leading us on this journey and
even though you sometimes call me crazy
Our two worlds connected like in a movie
You know me and you have me
I get lost in my thoughts and I just ask myself
why today's world works more on screen
And I am reminded how much I need you
That's why I'll take you into my loving arms
I perceive all your calm tones in every minute
and I tell you day after day how much
I love you
You got me, I got you, really
You are my happiness,
my endorphin and oxytocin
We are getting closer and closer
You hear my secret tones,
and have known for some time
Our hearts are leading us on this journey and
even though you sometimes call me crazy
Our two worlds connected like in a movie
You know me and you have me
Published 12th Jul 2020
| Edited 13th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Just a short one I guess partially to deliver the note below in case anyone wonders.
In regards to the last one with audio reading, I have decided to end that experiment and so it is no longer visible. I really appreciate those that offered such kind and supportive feedback but I never really planned to leave it up long. I was just testing and pushing myself out of my comfort zone and I had not really expected it to get so many listens so quickly.
If you don't know what I am talking about, don't worry you didn't miss much. :)
In regards to the last one with audio reading, I have decided to end that experiment and so it is no longer visible. I really appreciate those that offered such kind and supportive feedback but I never really planned to leave it up long. I was just testing and pushing myself out of my comfort zone and I had not really expected it to get so many listens so quickly.
If you don't know what I am talking about, don't worry you didn't miss much. :)
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12th Jul 2020 11:24pm
Y'all gotta accept that you've a beautiful voice. That said I respect your inclination. This piece is beautifully romantic. What an intoxicating passage this is,
"You are my happiness,
my endorphin and oxytocin"
Grab that happy brass ring that you so deserve.
"You are my happiness,
my endorphin and oxytocin"
Grab that happy brass ring that you so deserve.
12th Jul 2020 11:37pm
Telling me what I have to do, I see how it is. lol Wait, I meant thank you. And thank you for the comment, I am glad you like it. :)
Those lines did feel a bit lazy though since they are so similar to 'you are my drug'
Those lines did feel a bit lazy though since they are so similar to 'you are my drug'
12th Jul 2020 11:52pm
You can never write too much about love or describe too many times the ecstasy it makes you feel.
12th Jul 2020 11:36pm
12th Jul 2020 11:41pm
Thanks I_IS_ME, I am glad you thought it was tight. I also appreciate you weighing in. :)
12th Jul 2020 11:46pm
12th Jul 2020 11:52pm
Lol, now I'll miss the sound of your voice but I'm glad you put it out there for a little while.
Guess I'll just have to be happy reading your writes. 😃
Guess I'll just have to be happy reading your writes. 😃
12th Jul 2020 11:59pm
Thank you for the beautiful compliment. But way to make me feel conflicted, because I feel kind of bad that I took something away.
But that makes me feel a little better. :)
But that makes me feel a little better. :)
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
13th Jul 2020 00:34am
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13th Jul 2020 00:38am
14th Jul 2020 5:36pm
"Our hearts are leading us on this journey"... the heart is the best compass when it comes to love and happiness.
Cool write Kristina.
Cool write Kristina.
14th Jul 2020 9:51pm
Thanks again wallyroo, I am really glad you liked this one also. ❤️ The heart is the best compass but even still sometimes the compass can lead us astray.
8th Sep 2020 9:22pm
Love is the feeling of security and knowing that you have someone by your side who supports you and truly loves you. Keep on writing.
8th Sep 2020 9:45pm
Having someone who loves you in the good and bad times makes everything better. :) Thanks for the comment.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Feb 2021 4:03pm
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7th Feb 2021 9:34pm
There is nothing more beautiful than two souls connecting on a deeper level. Thank you for the beautiful comment.
