Hmmmm fresh berries are the best! I eat them right from the vine whenever possible. One can taste the sun and earth. The alliteration of the b's in L1 sets the tone of flow, allowed the consonance of s in L2 to set the tempo and join L3. Beautiful little haiku bursting with goodness!
Thank you so much Ahavati for your beautiful comments and feedback as well as the add to your RL .. there truly is nothing sweeter .. I am blessed to have walking trails where they are in abundance at the very edges so I'm not getting all tangled up .. just enjoying their wonderful wild sweetness! ♡xx
Your writes are so consistently an oasis where one can drink of a pure expression. I feel good energy when I slide the updates page down and come across them. That means a lot to me. 💖🙏