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Re. Sensation Play
7th Jul 2020 11:39pm
Swag... Where you been.
Missed reading your poetic mini series..
I've been m.i.a. sometimes myself.
Missed reading your poetic mini series..
I've been m.i.a. sometimes myself.
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Re: Re. Sensation Play
8th Jul 2020 3:20am
I have been on vacation and unplugged for awhile, but i am back now :)
good to hear from you PS
good to hear from you PS
Re. Sensation Play
8th Jul 2020 2:47am
Oh, that's a nice composition.
You could say as well
'Painting shallow breaths.' 🤔
I liked the line 'Total darkness' which shows somehow the transformation from conscious to inconscious.
You could say as well
'Painting shallow breaths.' 🤔
I liked the line 'Total darkness' which shows somehow the transformation from conscious to inconscious.
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Re: Re. Sensation Play
8th Jul 2020 3:21am
Thank you so much for reading my work and commenting as well
I am glad you liked it
i like the painting shallow breaths line ..... saving that one now so its mine lol
I am glad you liked it
i like the painting shallow breaths line ..... saving that one now so its mine lol
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Re: Re. Sensation Play
9th Jul 2020 00:19am
Re. Sensation Play
9th Jul 2020 9:04am
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9th Jul 2020 9:28am
Re. Sensation Play
10th Jul 2020 3:26am
I liked the entire piece, the artwork, the words...they made each other stronger.i like how you were able to “progress” a story within the confines of A N T I C. I P A T I O N.
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Re: Re. Sensation Play
10th Jul 2020 3:29am
Thank you so much for your kind words and taking the time to check out my work
I am glad you enjoyed this piece
I am glad you enjoyed this piece
Re. Sensation Play
13th Jul 2020 00:22am
Re: Re. Sensation Play
13th Jul 2020 00:29am
Thank you for your kind words Kristina and for taking the time to stop in and check this one out.
I an glad you enjoyed it
I an glad you enjoyed it