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I Adore Her
The woman I adore Is Right there, so perfect,
Naked, on her knees, Hands behind her back, She looks down Waiting for me.
Her hair the color of whiskey , Almost reaches those perfect Exposed breasts as it drapes softly over her shoulders.
Like a wolf in the dark, I circle around her,, Watching her, Studying her,
I adore her…
I see her like that
Vulnerable, At my disposal,
I’m like an animal, I almost growl, As I run my hand through her golden-brown hair,
Holding her chin, I lift her face and kiss her lips before peering deep into her eyes.
Oh God! The beauty of her smile!
I use my belt, Around her neck. Like a Black collar on her pale skin.
I pull her close, Caress her face.
I adore her…
Don’t mistake
Her submission for weakness
She is stronger
Then I will ever be
I adore her
Naked, on her knees, Hands behind her back, She looks down Waiting for me.
Her hair the color of whiskey , Almost reaches those perfect Exposed breasts as it drapes softly over her shoulders.
Like a wolf in the dark, I circle around her,, Watching her, Studying her,
I adore her…
I see her like that
Vulnerable, At my disposal,
I’m like an animal, I almost growl, As I run my hand through her golden-brown hair,
Holding her chin, I lift her face and kiss her lips before peering deep into her eyes.
Oh God! The beauty of her smile!
I use my belt, Around her neck. Like a Black collar on her pale skin.
I pull her close, Caress her face.
I adore her…
Don’t mistake
Her submission for weakness
She is stronger
Then I will ever be
I adore her
Published 19th Jul 2020
| Edited 20th Jul 2020
Author's Note
A lil attempt at something more outside my "normal"
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Jul 2020 9:49pm
19th Jul 2020 10:04pm
You just made me smile :)
Brought me back to the 80's for a second
On a more serious note
I am glad you enjoyed this, and if you have noticed there is more truth to the title of this piece than most will ever know
I truly do adore her :)
Thanks for stopping in LilDragonFLy, and as always thanks for your kind words and support
Brought me back to the 80's for a second
On a more serious note
I am glad you enjoyed this, and if you have noticed there is more truth to the title of this piece than most will ever know
I truly do adore her :)
Thanks for stopping in LilDragonFLy, and as always thanks for your kind words and support
19th Jul 2020 9:58pm
This...this is how you make a submissive truly wish to give you all and more. Beautifully written and the sentiment is heartachingly pure. I am still swooning....and sighing....
Thank you so much for your kind words
i am glad you enjoyed this, it was my first write with out any real form to it.
i am glad you enjoyed this, it was my first write with out any real form to it.
19th Aug 2020 9:55am
Don’t mistake
Her submission for weakness
She is stronger
Then I will ever be
You know how true this is. It's lovely to see it recognised. That's what it should be in my eyes. It's not weakness to be bullied. It's allowing the man to be her man. LOVED this!
Her submission for weakness
She is stronger
Then I will ever be
You know how true this is. It's lovely to see it recognised. That's what it should be in my eyes. It's not weakness to be bullied. It's allowing the man to be her man. LOVED this!
19th Aug 2020 1:18pm
