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Drink your memory back
Every night I come home
To an empty silent house
No calls on the phone
No reason to go out
Light a candle, watch it burn
Pour a drink in a dirty glass
Try to drink away the hurt
And bring your memory back
Well I lost you long ago
And cannot get you back
Now the only relief I know
Is to drink your memory back
To an empty silent house
No calls on the phone
No reason to go out
Light a candle, watch it burn
Pour a drink in a dirty glass
Try to drink away the hurt
And bring your memory back
Well I lost you long ago
And cannot get you back
Now the only relief I know
Is to drink your memory back
Published 2nd Jul 2020
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2nd Jul 2020 9:30pm
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2nd Jul 2020 10:14pm
I love the title I love the poem itself I love the rhyme scheme great job overall I am ready to read more of your work
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6th May 2021 12:33pm
Good sharp summary of grief and loss.
It's exactly what my oldest friend is going through. I've tried my best to help him move on but he can't.
It's exactly what my oldest friend is going through. I've tried my best to help him move on but he can't.
6th May 2021 10:23pm
21st May 2021 11:41pm
I can relate to this poem, totally. always remembering...always drinking to forget so I can remember
22nd May 2021 00:02am
24th Aug 2021 00:30am
Well penned, the use of the repeat works really well and the clear image of home life is one many will relate too, myself included.
24th Aug 2021 7:53pm
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