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Do I Haunt You?
Do I haunt you?
The taste of your mouth in mine,
The heat of the palm of your hand,
The scent of your masculine sweat,
The sound of your most primal growl,
Your face inches from mine as you claim me.
I lay alone,
Remembering,
Yearning to reach out,
And behold you again with my senses.
You haunt me,
Diaphanous, sinister promise,
Whimsy, shimmering, nearly solid,
My trembling hand extends and the mist is gone.
Can you yet taste my nectar?
Can you feel the strands of hair in your fist?
Can you smell our conjoined, intoxicating juices?
Can you still hear my hushed moans and whispered pleas?
Can you see me, see the color of my eyes, looking up into yours?
Do I haunt you?
The taste of your mouth in mine,
The heat of the palm of your hand,
The scent of your masculine sweat,
The sound of your most primal growl,
Your face inches from mine as you claim me.
I lay alone,
Remembering,
Yearning to reach out,
And behold you again with my senses.
You haunt me,
Diaphanous, sinister promise,
Whimsy, shimmering, nearly solid,
My trembling hand extends and the mist is gone.
Can you yet taste my nectar?
Can you feel the strands of hair in your fist?
Can you smell our conjoined, intoxicating juices?
Can you still hear my hushed moans and whispered pleas?
Can you see me, see the color of my eyes, looking up into yours?
Do I haunt you?
Published 1st Jul 2020
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1st Jul 2020 11:02pm
Excellent! That is the very best compliment you could have given. Thank you so much reading and leaving such a delightful note!
2nd Jul 2020 00:59am
Soft, sexy, sensual and hot. Great piece. Really enjoyed it. Great work x
3rd Jul 2020 00:16am
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Consider yourself properly haunted.
3rd Jul 2020 00:20am
2nd Jul 2020 4:08am
I loved your frequent questions here! The protagonist is haunted by (her?) memory, but in a sweetly delirious way. And I imagined that she longs for the answer to her questions to be “yes, yes, yes,”.
Reaching out in the mist evoked a wonderful image...but of sadness when no one was there...leaving only more questions.
Thanks for posting this P.L.,
Reaching out in the mist evoked a wonderful image...but of sadness when no one was there...leaving only more questions.
Thanks for posting this P.L.,
3rd Jul 2020 00:20am
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and for leaving such a beautiful comment. I do love to leave unanswered questions. I wonder also if she ever receives an answer...
I am just as haunted as the rest.
I am just as haunted as the rest.
2nd Jul 2020 11:37pm
a very sweet sensual lines love cries aloud from between the lines
awesome work
awesome work
3rd Jul 2020 00:23am
3rd Jul 2020 00:33am
3rd Jul 2020 00:38am
I'll leave that debate to the ages and simply take my respite in words.
3rd Jul 2020 3:41am
What could have been or what had been most certainly will haunt..! Enjoyed the way you presented the reminiscing via the questions.
4th Jul 2020 2:27am
Thank you so much for stopping by to read. Indeed you are correct. We create ourselves today what haunt our souls tomorrow.
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4th Jul 2020 8:42pm
Lovemaking should be memorable to haunt the lover's memory long after. Reading it still touches emotionally. Favourite line:
Can you smell our conjoined, intoxicating juices?
Can you smell our conjoined, intoxicating juices?
