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Happiness
I'll not shed a tear
I'll not show weakness
The world is already full of victims
Though my broken wings are falling
And I'm dropping like a cannon ball
From the sky
I'll not stop flying,
I'll learn to land as I hit the ground.
Failure is a form of success for me,
Pain is another form of joy to me,
All that was taken was never meant to be.
I'll take my good with my bad
Do the best with what I have.
I chose to be happy
For I now know, true happiness is learning to smile as you fall.
Published 1st Jul 2020
Author's Note
Announcing myself back...
Hope this one is a bang
Hope this one is a bang
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1st Jul 2020 5:46am
So full of strength ... inspiration ... great flow and cadence ... just what I needed right now ...
1st Jul 2020 9:09pm
1st Jul 2020 6:51am
I agree with the above comment. This is inspiring and brings hope into this world that needs it. Great piece!
1st Jul 2020 9:11pm
It's said hope is a living dream...
As long as there's hope there'll always be will and where there's will there's a way
Thank you
As long as there's hope there'll always be will and where there's will there's a way
Thank you
1st Jul 2020 12:25pm
One of my favourite songs has a line, "you taught my feet to dance upon disappointment".... this poem reminds me of that. True joy is not dependent on circumstances....
Great write.
Great write.
1st Jul 2020 9:12pm
1st Jul 2020 11:23pm
Christian song - don't know if that's up your alley, but here it is: https://youtu.be/n5KNck6k5OY
2nd Jul 2020 11:02pm
2nd Jul 2020 6:48am
Recognize adapt and overcome.. not one thing can hold you down.. our failures are part of the ingredients to a successful outcome..
Concrete narrative poetry blend, creative associated artwork
nice flow.. metering and cadence
uplifting, positive, determination, humility, inspirational, Illuminating
very nice
smoke!
respect brother poet
Concrete narrative poetry blend, creative associated artwork
nice flow.. metering and cadence
uplifting, positive, determination, humility, inspirational, Illuminating
very nice
smoke!
respect brother poet
2nd Jul 2020 11:05pm
It's said one should learn to build a house from bricks others throw at him....
You really hit the mark with your response
Thank you Brother
You really hit the mark with your response
Thank you Brother
word, your backfeed is important me, all respect pOt my poetic brother
I have also heard a similar statement growing up..
always respect
I have also heard a similar statement growing up..
always respect
