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Addiction
Feed my addiction
I need my affliction
Fill my desire
Make my pussy on fire
Bring me temptation
Ease my frustration
with your erection
in my direction
You give me sensation
Elation
Adulation
I feel free
to be me
Don't you see
my craving
for you
endlessly
I need my affliction
Fill my desire
Make my pussy on fire
Bring me temptation
Ease my frustration
with your erection
in my direction
You give me sensation
Elation
Adulation
I feel free
to be me
Don't you see
my craving
for you
endlessly
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Re. Addiction
30th Jun 2020 6:29am
Favourite lines:
Bring me temptation
Ease my frustration
with your erection
in my direction
Bring me temptation
Ease my frustration
with your erection
in my direction
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Re. Addiction
30th Jun 2020 8:40am
Re. Addiction
30th Jun 2020 8:50am
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30th Jun 2020 4:46pm
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Re. Addiction
3rd Jul 2020 7:33pm
This is a hot spill of emotion; you are obviously in love and more importantly feel loved and able to be yourself.
I love the line 'I feel free to be me' so important to be able to grow as a person.
thoroughly enjoyed it keep writing
I love the line 'I feel free to be me' so important to be able to grow as a person.
thoroughly enjoyed it keep writing
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Re. Addiction
5th Jul 2020 10:42am
Re. Addiction
5th Jul 2020 10:59pm
Re. Addiction
Beautifully rendered, Lady B 🥀
Love your spot-on rhymes and easy flow, your metaphors and syntax make this a sure winner to the mind's-eye of any true poetic connoisseur. In a Skeltonic verse format, your brilliant, dancing pen has warmly conspired with your enthralling imagination to bless us with a truly succulent work of sensual ambiance that most certainly sent a delightful rush to my manly nethers.
You know, M'Dear? I really love the word "pussy", and even more-so when it's poured hotly from the softly alluring lips of a lady, and the way you've shared it gifted a definitely pleasurable throb that inspires me to want to answer your passionate behest … what red-blooded bard would not? ; )
I've read several of your pieces, enjoying each, and I'm sure I'll beck back for more. This one swept me rather breathlessly … and, I'd pick a part to highlight for you, but the entirety worked so well together, I just read it a few more times, instead. 😏
I think you are a fine poetess (if you'll not mind me saying so), who knows how to grab a reader's imagination, hold on 'til the climax, and make us want more.
With much respect and awe … my warmest hug of thanks to thee for a most lovely treat, Dear Bawaga ⁓ Richard 🍃
Love your spot-on rhymes and easy flow, your metaphors and syntax make this a sure winner to the mind's-eye of any true poetic connoisseur. In a Skeltonic verse format, your brilliant, dancing pen has warmly conspired with your enthralling imagination to bless us with a truly succulent work of sensual ambiance that most certainly sent a delightful rush to my manly nethers.
You know, M'Dear? I really love the word "pussy", and even more-so when it's poured hotly from the softly alluring lips of a lady, and the way you've shared it gifted a definitely pleasurable throb that inspires me to want to answer your passionate behest … what red-blooded bard would not? ; )
I've read several of your pieces, enjoying each, and I'm sure I'll beck back for more. This one swept me rather breathlessly … and, I'd pick a part to highlight for you, but the entirety worked so well together, I just read it a few more times, instead. 😏
I think you are a fine poetess (if you'll not mind me saying so), who knows how to grab a reader's imagination, hold on 'til the climax, and make us want more.
With much respect and awe … my warmest hug of thanks to thee for a most lovely treat, Dear Bawaga ⁓ Richard 🍃
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Re. Addiction
26th Oct 2021 8:32pm
Wow!
I apologize for the length … hope I didn't wear out my welcome.
Guess I was just inspired. 😌
I apologize for the length … hope I didn't wear out my welcome.
Guess I was just inspired. 😌
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