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Unfair
Melting
in a bath
Of mixed emotion
A whirlpool of
jealousy
pity love
lust desire
Despair ecstasy
Forgiveness
Encapsulated in bubbles of honesty
The crackling POPS a reminder of
R E A L I T Y
in a bath
Of mixed emotion
A whirlpool of
jealousy
pity love
lust desire
Despair ecstasy
Forgiveness
Encapsulated in bubbles of honesty
The crackling POPS a reminder of
R E A L I T Y
Published 28th Jun 2020
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28th Jun 2020 12:16pm
Many of us have spewed out emotions alone in the bath, loved the imagery loved the floaty layout.
Great raw honest emotional read. Great jib
Great raw honest emotional read. Great jib
28th Jun 2020 1:20pm
28th Jun 2020 12:48pm
A tantalizing glimpse of raw emotion bubbling like a geyser then erupting or menacing like an iceberg with just the tip above the water as your visual hints at with your knees. nice legs btw.
28th Jun 2020 1:21pm
Ouch :(
Beautifully written, yet heartwrenching...
Great writing, Bawaga!
I liked the creative layout you chose for this one. Hope you feel better soon!
Beautifully written, yet heartwrenching...
Great writing, Bawaga!
I liked the creative layout you chose for this one. Hope you feel better soon!
28th Jun 2020 2:33pm
28th Jun 2020 3:59pm
You're welcome, and you are right... We have to take the good with the bad. Keep on keeping on :)
28th Jun 2020 5:55pm
To bathe at the end of a long hard day is to be baptised from the accumulated dirt of sinful thoughts, questionable deeds and imposed misgivings gathered over the past handful of hours dedicated to someone else's needs.
Salvation achieved by the tender art of tlc amongst the delicate bubbles coupled by the warm embrace of hot holy water exorcising the stress from a troubled soul, reuniting once again with the love lost from yourself.
Tears in the rain are a means to be cleansed, yet tears in the tub is much warmer way to be healed.
XXX
Salvation achieved by the tender art of tlc amongst the delicate bubbles coupled by the warm embrace of hot holy water exorcising the stress from a troubled soul, reuniting once again with the love lost from yourself.
Tears in the rain are a means to be cleansed, yet tears in the tub is much warmer way to be healed.
XXX
28th Jun 2020 6:26pm
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