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.. her gifts
her hair her face her ears her nose,
her waist her rear her legs her toes,
her hips her breast and delicious moist lips,
her sensual scent rivaled by Rose,
not sure which is the greatest of gifts..
it is her mind that I surely have chose..
her waist her rear her legs her toes,
her hips her breast and delicious moist lips,
her sensual scent rivaled by Rose,
not sure which is the greatest of gifts..
it is her mind that I surely have chose..
Published 11th Jun 2020
| Edited 8th Nov 2020
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11th Jun 2020 5:30am
11th Jun 2020 5:46am
Thank you for your much needed and respected commentary.
I truly need the feedback
Respect
I truly need the feedback
Respect
11th Jun 2020 5:59am
11th Jun 2020 8:16am
And too agree that the mind is the most wonderful.
Yet I see by your sequencing that there must first be something that catches one's attention long enough to appreciate the magnificence of a mind
Experience does bring appreciation
To that which began as a purely visual fixation
I definitely like this piece
Yet I see by your sequencing that there must first be something that catches one's attention long enough to appreciate the magnificence of a mind
Experience does bring appreciation
To that which began as a purely visual fixation
I definitely like this piece
11th Jun 2020 3:36pm
I thank you for taking the time out to read the piece and commenting on it in such detail..
as poetry goes feedback is one of the most important tools.
Respect my poetic brother
as poetry goes feedback is one of the most important tools.
Respect my poetic brother
11th Jun 2020 6:52pm
11th Jun 2020 10:44pm
Thank you so very much for taking the time out to read the piece and comment
your response is appreciated..
Respect
your response is appreciated..
Respect
13th Jun 2020 2:01pm
Killer closing with this ... love the parallel structure ... maintaining the cadence ...
13th Jun 2020 3:38pm
Thank you so very much for taking the time to read the piece and comment with detail.. I truly admire your work, your opinion is of the utmost importance. ;-)
Respect my poetic sister
Respect my poetic sister
14th Jun 2020 6:37am
14th Jun 2020 2:39pm
Thank you my sister for stopping by.. and commenting so wonderfully..
very important to me
waiting for your next piece.
Respect
very important to me
waiting for your next piece.
Respect
26th Jun 2020 6:06pm
27th Jun 2020 1:52am
thank you so very much KristinaX for taking the time out to read the piece and comment so encouragingly
