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THE BOX'S COVER
We are all created equal
But we're each a different puzzle
Put together we are balanced
Incomplete we may not be
I am still a work-in-progress
And there are a lot of pieces
But I've seen the box's cover
And damn I know it's worth it
But we're each a different puzzle
Put together we are balanced
Incomplete we may not be
I am still a work-in-progress
And there are a lot of pieces
But I've seen the box's cover
And damn I know it's worth it
Published 9th Jun 2020
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9th Jun 2020 11:12pm
You just perfectly wrote a concept I've been trying to capture for a long time. Awesome! Now I don't have to. 😀
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9th Jun 2020 11:25pm
Wow, thank you. Sometimes the idea of being your best self is like looking up at a mountain whose top is hidden in the clouds. I think this poem came out of a desire to keep climbing, no matter...
9th Jun 2020 11:33pm
9th Jun 2020 11:23pm
Awesome, Kumar :)
I liked your beautiful, creatively crafted analogy... clever. It is relatable, except, I still haven't found my cover :P
Keep up the writing!
I liked your beautiful, creatively crafted analogy... clever. It is relatable, except, I still haven't found my cover :P
Keep up the writing!
11th Jun 2020 8:02am
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