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Last Bridge to Brooklyn
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Which way to Home?
(which way? which way?)
to Home.
I want to go home go home.
I want to go to home to Brooklyn
(Brooklyn NY) home to Brooklyn.
195 - 23rd Street
(bet. 4th and 5th Avenues)
South Brooklyn (Park Slope?)
2nd floor, front apartment.
(195, 2nd floor)
Phone: Hy9-5293
or else "go home" to:
Bay Ridge (Brooklyn)
880 - 68th Street
(2nd floor front, again)
A short block from Ft.Hamilton Pkwy
~TE3-7996~
(just 'round the corner from the Fortway Theater)
Pizza next door to the movie house (now an Oriental super market)
Home........I want to go Home (for the last time).
Hop on the Sea Beach Express to Coney Island (one last time,
as my heart is pretty much done for)
Eat knishes on Coney Island Ave.
Say hello (and goodbye) to the penguins again.
Say hello/goodbye, goodbye/hello, dear Brooklyn.
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Which way to Home?
(which way? which way?)
to Home.
I want to go home go home.
I want to go to home to Brooklyn
(Brooklyn NY) home to Brooklyn.
195 - 23rd Street
(bet. 4th and 5th Avenues)
South Brooklyn (Park Slope?)
2nd floor, front apartment.
(195, 2nd floor)
Phone: Hy9-5293
or else "go home" to:
Bay Ridge (Brooklyn)
880 - 68th Street
(2nd floor front, again)
A short block from Ft.Hamilton Pkwy
~TE3-7996~
(just 'round the corner from the Fortway Theater)
Pizza next door to the movie house (now an Oriental super market)
Home........I want to go Home (for the last time).
Hop on the Sea Beach Express to Coney Island (one last time,
as my heart is pretty much done for)
Eat knishes on Coney Island Ave.
Say hello (and goodbye) to the penguins again.
Say hello/goodbye, goodbye/hello, dear Brooklyn.
QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ
2020dkzkpoomQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ
Published 7th Jun 2020
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The Bridge
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7th Jun 2020 2:54pm
Yeah, well.....all my NY relatives are dead, & friends all moved away. Nobody left to hang out with. Besides, most of my visits before '07 (last time I was there to bury my godmother), Leah was with me. Great travel companion. I don't really wanna go there without her.
Makin me cry again.
Hey why don't you redirect some of your legion readership my way. Lie and tell em how "damn good" i am. Actually had 3 consecutive poems a week or so ago that no one would "acknowledge"...(not even Dart) to have read. Ha! Can't remember last time i wrote anything got more than 4-5 reads.
At the beginnig of my DUP life, I had a guy tell me he wasn't gonna read me anymore because my stuff is "too damn powerfully emotional"...never saw his name again. How can shit like that be "true"? No one in my family has even mentioned my book. I'm gonna take all my copies back from 'em. That'll teach them! Ha!
Makin me cry again.
Hey why don't you redirect some of your legion readership my way. Lie and tell em how "damn good" i am. Actually had 3 consecutive poems a week or so ago that no one would "acknowledge"...(not even Dart) to have read. Ha! Can't remember last time i wrote anything got more than 4-5 reads.
At the beginnig of my DUP life, I had a guy tell me he wasn't gonna read me anymore because my stuff is "too damn powerfully emotional"...never saw his name again. How can shit like that be "true"? No one in my family has even mentioned my book. I'm gonna take all my copies back from 'em. That'll teach them! Ha!
7th Jun 2020 4:16pm
7th Jun 2020 4:54pm
8th Jun 2020 1:27am
7th Jun 2020 5:03pm
Your poetry is intense, like there's no filter between the emotion & the page. Powerful.
8th Jun 2020 1:29am
