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Paint me in your soul
I built you up in my heart and soul
What else do you need?
And if I love you to the last day
What else do you need?
Time goes by but I stay the way you want me
Wipe the tears from my eyes
when you tell me I have done something wrong
I have cried enough and still
I remain steadfast even in the hard times
even if you aren't in such vivid colors
I still paint you in my soul,
not on a canvas
And how good it will be
when the hard times are like the first day
again and we can forget the strife
What else do you need?
And if I love you to the last day
What else do you need?
Time goes by but I stay the way you want me
Wipe the tears from my eyes
when you tell me I have done something wrong
I have cried enough and still
I remain steadfast even in the hard times
even if you aren't in such vivid colors
I still paint you in my soul,
not on a canvas
And how good it will be
when the hard times are like the first day
again and we can forget the strife
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Re. Paint you in my soul
6th Jun 2020 3:29pm
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6th Jun 2020 10:57pm
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6th Jun 2020 9:53pm
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6th Jun 2020 10:56pm
Re. Paint you in my soul
7th Jun 2020 3:29pm
Wow this is beautifully written, you're very talented keep them coming
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7th Jun 2020 3:35pm
Re. Paint you in my soul
8th Jun 2020 00:44am
That was really beautiful and heartfelt.. it really touched me. Such emotive writing, Kristina. Truly wrenching...
*hugs*
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Re: Re. Paint you in my soul
8th Jun 2020 00:56am
Thanks NewBeginnings! I kind of stress out a little before posting something and your comment has made me feel a lot better. Your feedback means a lot.
*hugsback*
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Re. Paint you in my soul
8th Jun 2020 1:00am
Very tight. Not a word I say often but I think I_IS_ME would agree with me on this one. It's very concise.
However, I think the title would be more hard-hitting if it were renamed "Paint Me In Your Soul" as a sort of wish or hope really. I will PM you. I have a poem about paint, canvas & the like. ;-)
However, I think the title would be more hard-hitting if it were renamed "Paint Me In Your Soul" as a sort of wish or hope really. I will PM you. I have a poem about paint, canvas & the like. ;-)
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Tight, lol yes, that's great, thank you! you know I think you are right Paint Me in Your Soul is better, I changed it. :)
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You deserve that wish/hope & it's the true personal message you're driving home here. ;-)
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Paint me in your soul
10th Jun 2020 2:07am
What a lovely little poem!
Thanks for a golden heart, KristinaX, that makes love a song in the midst of a desert.
I imagine you PAINTing in your soul the love that PAINs you in the same place.
I believe all your paint will cover all the pain -- and if not, then you should find a new canvas.
But never stop painting; your brushstrokes are wonderful.
Sincerely
cab
Thanks for a golden heart, KristinaX, that makes love a song in the midst of a desert.
I imagine you PAINTing in your soul the love that PAINs you in the same place.
I believe all your paint will cover all the pain -- and if not, then you should find a new canvas.
But never stop painting; your brushstrokes are wonderful.
Sincerely
cab
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Re: Paint me in your soul
10th Jun 2020 3:17am
Thanks cab! that is a really beautiful comment. you left me speechless with your amazing writing. Like I said before even your comments are poetic. ❤️
Re. Paint me in your soul
23rd Jun 2020 9:54pm
This is beautiful, Kristina❣❣ Such a romantic passage, "even if you aren't in such vivid colors
I still paint you in my soul," Your awesome😘
I still paint you in my soul," Your awesome😘
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23rd Jun 2020 10:07pm
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23rd Jun 2020 10:31pm
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Re: Re. Paint me in your soul
26th Nov 2021 4:14am
I do have a profound appreciation for art. And I do so love to touch the art, to make the canvas shudder and the colors flow... xoxo <3