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Crone, Sage of Age
An old woman
Mind of a child
Who am i today
The old lady
Crone, sage of age
My child
Wonderment
Fairy tales
Running thru my head
My mythical Kniight
I know is somewhere
One who
Sweeps maidens of age
Off their feet
Honoring them
Giving them praises
Never received
I am child
I am woman
Giver of life
Into physical existence
Leader in all ways
Even though not
Conceded by others
Who wish to remain
In charge
As wars and destruction
Are wrought on humankind
Without thought
Other than ego driven
Chest pounding
Self-destruction
And so,
Pendulums swing
Wide, side-to-side
Slowly centering itself
Part of the tree of knowledge
For all to partake
An old woman
Mind of a child
Who am i today
The old lady
Crone, sage of age
Mind of a child
Who am i today
The old lady
Crone, sage of age
My child
Wonderment
Fairy tales
Running thru my head
My mythical Kniight
I know is somewhere
One who
Sweeps maidens of age
Off their feet
Honoring them
Giving them praises
Never received
I am child
I am woman
Giver of life
Into physical existence
Leader in all ways
Even though not
Conceded by others
Who wish to remain
In charge
As wars and destruction
Are wrought on humankind
Without thought
Other than ego driven
Chest pounding
Self-destruction
And so,
Pendulums swing
Wide, side-to-side
Slowly centering itself
Part of the tree of knowledge
For all to partake
An old woman
Mind of a child
Who am i today
The old lady
Crone, sage of age
Published 5th Jun 2020
| Edited 7th Jun 2020
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5th Jun 2020 10:51pm
6th Jun 2020 3:59am
6th Jun 2020 3:48pm
6th Jun 2020 11:56pm
An interesting observation of self. We will always have that child inside us. Elsiesan, good read.
7th Jun 2020 11:29am
11th Jun 2020 9:23pm
i couldn't believe what i read !!
Leader in all ways
Who wish to remain
In charge,
prefer be an old woman with sage
than birdbrain teenage
'' Who am i today ''
this is who you are today
inner queen young lady
outer sage old woman
with fixed mindset, others needed !!
you are more than library .
Leader in all ways
Who wish to remain
In charge,
prefer be an old woman with sage
than birdbrain teenage
'' Who am i today ''
this is who you are today
inner queen young lady
outer sage old woman
with fixed mindset, others needed !!
you are more than library .
11th Jun 2020 9:50pm
Thought you might like. Thank you for the compliment and if you like erotica, check them out. Good candy. Thank you for your support.
I just reread this. I want to say, you really did understand and comprehend as well as added to my write. An absolutely beautifully written poetic commentary. Again, I thank you.
What you wrote is a poem waiting to be written.
What you wrote is a poem waiting to be written.
4th Jul 2020 10:30pm
12th Apr 2021 12:08pm
Great poem e
It important to take credit for what you did in life and what you continue to do to get people to see ....
We are mentors now of this age but we are are as relevant as ever as we can pas on the wisdom and experience.
Fine writing !
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RL AWARD
It important to take credit for what you did in life and what you continue to do to get people to see ....
We are mentors now of this age but we are are as relevant as ever as we can pas on the wisdom and experience.
Fine writing !
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
12th Apr 2021 12:14pm
Thought you might enjoy. Thank you for taking the time to read and reply with your own insightful sage of age wisdom.
