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Taste The Ache...
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Trying new things..a minimalist approach🌼
Trying new things..a minimalist approach🌼
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Re. Taste The Ache...
5th Jun 2020 4:06am
This flowed across my libidinal being like an erotic sweetness I can savor in the sacred night of my heart. Truly you put your all into this poem. And my God what an invitation you've made here. Whoever is the recipient of such resplendent delight would be a fool not to accept it.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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John, you're such a tease. I'm pleased this flowed across your libidinal being like an erotic sweetness you can savor in the sacred night of your heart. I'm forever grateful every time I see your words of praise on my page and tickled pink they can please the senses
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5th Jun 2020 5:00am
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7th Jun 2020 10:44pm
He Lawrence! So good to see you..
I know short isn't my usual😏...glad it was sweet!!!
I know short isn't my usual😏...glad it was sweet!!!
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5th Jun 2020 6:30am
Echo Goldenmyst. The erotic delight is heightened by the suggestive background picture hinting at oral pleasures.
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7th Jun 2020 10:46pm
Thank you, Solomon. The sharing of mingled tastes almost has a sacredness to it. Glad you likey.;)
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You are the queen of erotica, dearest Pandora ... Your erotic poems are classic and have the quality of regalness ... They have class of their own.... Love how sensually n elegantly your spills flow... I find a sense of serenity in those moments of intimacy in your erotica...
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These are such sweet words to read. I didn't always write in such a sensual realm, but I strive to put forth that effort with my whole heart. I'm glad you see them as such. Although they are created by my own originality, I must give credit to two Erotic Goddesses.. Willow & Taryn. They have highly influenced me since discovering them. In Taryn's absence, I remember reading until drunk off her poetry, and so hopeful she'd return. I know I'm rambling, but I also believe we all possess a gift within to have a powerful voice in erotica. Blessed Sunday to you, sweetums!💞🌼💐
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5th Jun 2020 8:32am
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7th Jun 2020 11:00pm
Thank you, sweet LilDragonfly. I think of you each time I see one. I'm sure you know they represent hope & change. Makes me wonder if you were becoming a new self when you created this account.🦟🌺
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5th Jun 2020 11:51am
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5th Jun 2020 1:06pm
Love how your words just flow upon the page nicely composed dear poetess..respect
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7th Jun 2020 11:03pm
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8th Jun 2020 12:34pm
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2020 2:15pm
{plea's}e...
Clever little word minx! I'm jealous of that maneuver. You certainly set a tone and then amp up the wattage. And the image so perfectly suits the verbage that it leaves wondering which was the inspiration and which the result. I'm gonna need a whole new reading list just for your little gems at this rate. :-)
Clever little word minx! I'm jealous of that maneuver. You certainly set a tone and then amp up the wattage. And the image so perfectly suits the verbage that it leaves wondering which was the inspiration and which the result. I'm gonna need a whole new reading list just for your little gems at this rate. :-)
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7th Jun 2020 11:07pm
I'm always tickled pink to see your praise, but as i mentioned above, I had two great role models to follow. In my own unique essence, pieces of you both have highly influenced me somehow. Especially you and your metaphors... i lust your metaphorical beauty. Love & light from afar 💞
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2020 3:43pm
This is a wonderful visual poem, gorgeous! The minimalist in you still causes quite the punch; a punch in ways I’d gladly be in the receiving end of! I’m gonna keep her!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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7th Jun 2020 11:12pm
Thank you, beautiful one! The same comment I gave Willow applies to you. In my own humble little way I've taken pieces of sensuality from you both. I had mentors without them knowing.;) Now if I could only master the erotic quatrains and sonnets like only you do. Mine are so stale without flow. Love & light with hugs from afar.🌼💖
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Thank you, sweet Ethan...
For reading & adding my humble erotica. Although i believe in one's own voice being expressed, i strive for something pleasing but not crude. So glad it was readable and likeable.;)
Love & light from Pandypops.💞
For reading & adding my humble erotica. Although i believe in one's own voice being expressed, i strive for something pleasing but not crude. So glad it was readable and likeable.;)
Love & light from Pandypops.💞
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7th Jun 2020 10:25pm
Oh my... I'm not usually one for erotic poetry, but this was sweet as saccharine ❤️🙏 beautiful visual entry, sweet Pandy! Thanks for sharing!! 😊
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7th Jun 2020 11:21pm
Those are words I always love to read; bringing some love to the erotic genre. We sure need it since we often get beat down. I'm beyond excited you enjoyed it & added it to your RL. Thank you ever kindly, NB🙏💞
Ps...keep up those collabs with crim, they're soul food. I promise!
Ps...keep up those collabs with crim, they're soul food. I promise!
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7th Jun 2020 10:27pm
in such few words you feed the mind body and soul of such sweet delightful lines
well done
well done
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7th Jun 2020 11:23pm
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13th Jun 2020 2:07pm
That sense of longing. So familiar. To be "tongue teased and stained" - beautiful expression.
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21st Jun 2020 11:17pm
So glad to see your presence, T. Unfortunately we both will continue to chase each other in circles with the way we come and go. Thank you so very much and take care, buddy!