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Morning Glory...
Just as the sun greets the moon,
the supple lines of my silhouette
were clasped and concealed beneath
p r i s m a t i c
r a y s
o f
h e a v e n.
Pressed against flushed apricot and deep crimson hues,
his torrid luminescence poured;
fully eclipsing my midnight horizons...
As our eyes then opened to greet the other's smile,
we were met with streams
of a burnt orange and magenta infused sunrise.
......soul kissed by morning's glory.
Published 3rd Jun 2020
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Copyright © 2020 PandoraUnleashed. All rights reserved.
A word of caution, use your full copyright disclosure. I just found this piece posted at All Poetry by the username of, Neil32. Within an fifteen minutes of my threat, he closed his account. Beware of the worthless bastard's out there! I'm going back through most pieces that I've neglected to tag..
A word of caution, use your full copyright disclosure. I just found this piece posted at All Poetry by the username of, Neil32. Within an fifteen minutes of my threat, he closed his account. Beware of the worthless bastard's out there! I'm going back through most pieces that I've neglected to tag..
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3rd Jun 2020 1:52pm
4th Jun 2020 8:12pm
Thank you so very much for the wonderful compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it!)💐
3rd Jun 2020 1:53pm
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4th Jun 2020 8:16pm
Thank you for appreciating my humble metaphor. Thanks also, for the read & welcome to the Deep.. ~ Pandy
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2020 2:57pm
Sweet hell, girl...the way your pen moves through metaphor and kisses beauty...Your writing is proof that poetry need not be long or formulaic to be perfect and beautiful! One of the many reasons I adore your presences on my screen. Sending you thoughts of love and hope this morning. I think there is a shortage of that these days...though I'm witnessing its rise...Much love to you, Pandora
4th Jun 2020 8:19pm
Your words made my heart happy, Willow. Thank you precious soul, and I'm thrilled to know you're in the midst of better days. Love & light from your moon sister afar.💞🌼
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3rd Jun 2020 11:43pm
You are so, so talented, Pandy :)
Love to see a new poem posted by you - this is absolutely gorgeous!
Love to see a new poem posted by you - this is absolutely gorgeous!
4th Jun 2020 8:25pm
NB, your words just lit up my dreary, rainy day! Thank you so much for always showing me such kindness and finding room on your RL! You humble me🙏💫
4th Jun 2020 8:26pm
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5th Jun 2020 4:04am
Honey, your metaphor here was an incredibly sensual mating of sunlight and intimacy. You made this rock in ways that left me breathless as your words poured through me like the morning kissing me. Your art is finessed so much I feel the pull of arousal. You will always be the sensual writer whose words stir me as art that is also incredibly erotic.
Xo
John
Xo
John
7th Jun 2020 11:37pm
Geesh, what does a girl say to such an amazing comment coming from a published man of incredibly amazing talent and epic metaphors. I love feeding you compliments, but get hit with shock when it comes to replying back to yours. All I can give back is my ultimate thank you. Your forever fan!💫💝
I'm going to be on the hunt for reading material later, or shall I call it yummy education. *wink*
I'm going to be on the hunt for reading material later, or shall I call it yummy education. *wink*
Anonymous
5th Jun 2020 2:15pm
This is beautiful Miss P....
7th Jun 2020 11:38pm
Anonymous
5th Jun 2020 3:47pm
Beautiful imagery here, gorgeous as well as a peaceful calm to accompany it. No better way to start the day! Another one going into ma’list!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
7th Jun 2020 11:40pm
A rather yummy morning encouraged those words. Mmmm. Thanks, sweetpea. You already know i appreciate you for infinity. xo🌺💫❣
10th Jun 2020 11:40pm
You pull back the curtains, and let the light flood in . Morning glory is a sensual awakening. You did justice to the moment... I love every word. 💞
6th Jul 2020 7:46pm
Hey you, I'm just now seeing this comment so forgive me. Unfortunately I found while glancing through the comments last night after finding a man posted it as his on All Poetry. The layout, word for word; replacing my with her Within 15 minutes of me joining that site go to ruin him, between his followers and the moderator , he deleted. Or it could've, given my savage comment posted..😡
2nd Jan 2023 2:49am
This is absolutely beautiful. Everyone else already wrote what I've wanted to, so know that I love this poem. <3
23rd Mar 2024 5:06pm
This piece evokes a vivid and sensual imagery, drawing on the celestial and natural elements to depict a profound moment of connection and intimacy. The imagery of the sun greeting the moon, the interplay of colors, and the metaphor of a soul kiss by morning's glory all contribute to a rich tapestry of emotions and sensations. The use of language, particularly the spacing and arrangement of words, adds a rhythmic quality that enhances the sensory experience. Overall, it's a beautifully crafted poem that captures the magic of a shared moment bathed in the splendor of dawn.
