i saw this offline before you added the visual and of course adored it. With the image it is a little difficult to see the words. The image is gorgeous though.
You make language into your own queendom of words here. The brilliance with which you weave words into a tapestry of poetic genius never ceases to amaze me my darling friend.
Very interesting visuals both verbal and background art.. makes me wish I knew how to create a visual piece or what program is easier to make one with?! Love your story's vibe. :)