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“TO CONTROL UNREST”
That is the reason
they are giving for escalating
things with guns-
the notional guard-
as if we should rest in this
time of wicked acts,
as if that is the
independence signed off on
so many years ago.
they are giving for escalating
things with guns-
the notional guard-
as if we should rest in this
time of wicked acts,
as if that is the
independence signed off on
so many years ago.
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Re. “TO CONTROL UNREST”
30th May 2020 11:45pm
Re: Re. “TO CONTROL UNREST”
31st May 2020 00:06am
Made it notional because they aren’t exactly being sent in to guard, at least, not people.
Re. “TO CONTROL UNREST”
31st May 2020 00:25am
I noticed that little nuance and hoped it was intentional! I enjoyed this powerful little piece.
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31st May 2020 2:42am
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1st Jun 2020 11:29pm
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2nd Jun 2020 00:45am
Re. “TO CONTROL UNREST”
2nd Jun 2020 7:04pm
Why haven't i dug into your poetry before now?!
goodness this is powerful and so well written.
goodness this is powerful and so well written.
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Re: Re. “TO CONTROL UNREST”
2nd Jun 2020 7:19pm
There’s a lot to dig into, lol. I have a hot furnace right now, lots cookin’. Thank you for high compliments!
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2nd Jun 2020 7:21pm
I think this is a time when poets either can’t stop their brains or they can’t start them. There is so much happening and it’s hard to keep focused. Or that’s how it is for me.
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