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Exit Conflict
Soiled center of being
Asleep, unaware
Needs no care
'Cause no one cares
Left behind, eating dust
I like being broken
Just as much
The state of things
Gone well awry
You look at me
Through cold, dead eyes
Sun turns to black
And I compromise
Exit conflict
Existence dies
Spoiled perfections
And a ribbon of disgust
Left tied to a dream
That nobody wants
So out with the old
And in with the new
We've fallen face-down
Chasing after the blue
Complacency killed
What was left of you
No more trust
No more truth
Asleep, unaware
Needs no care
'Cause no one cares
Left behind, eating dust
I like being broken
Just as much
The state of things
Gone well awry
You look at me
Through cold, dead eyes
Sun turns to black
And I compromise
Exit conflict
Existence dies
Spoiled perfections
And a ribbon of disgust
Left tied to a dream
That nobody wants
So out with the old
And in with the new
We've fallen face-down
Chasing after the blue
Complacency killed
What was left of you
No more trust
No more truth
Published 29th May 2020
| Edited 15th Nov 2020
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5th Jun 2020 7:05pm
This spill reminds me an awful lot of my spill, Symbiotic No
these lines:
"Sun turns to black
And I compromise
Exit conflict
Existence dies " <<-----compromise is the death of almost All relationships! I know this very well!!
Love the intricate rhyming and the progressive logical narrative.
am gonna nominate to New Member of the Month - June 2020, and if You want me to not - PM me
these lines:
"Sun turns to black
And I compromise
Exit conflict
Existence dies " <<-----compromise is the death of almost All relationships! I know this very well!!
Love the intricate rhyming and the progressive logical narrative.
am gonna nominate to New Member of the Month - June 2020, and if You want me to not - PM me
25th Mar 2024 00:43am
It's a heartfelt write, honest and sincere as if navigated through the rough seas of life.
Well done.
Well done.
