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Re. Risk
Everything You want with depth
is worth the storm, confused or ordered
we weather what we have to
Purpose
the soul knows
Lovely Write, Lovely Perfect Pic
How well we walk the tightrope
with whatever decision
Pen On Poetess!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
is worth the storm, confused or ordered
we weather what we have to
Purpose
the soul knows
Lovely Write, Lovely Perfect Pic
How well we walk the tightrope
with whatever decision
Pen On Poetess!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
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Re. Risk
28th May 2020 11:52pm
Re. Risk
28th May 2020 11:52pm
Your poems take me there both stylistically and with the sustenance of true substance. Filled with honesty and passion the sincerity is there along with your gift. Your talent runs deeper than wordsmihing into the realm of high art.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re. Risk
29th May 2020 11:28am
beautiful take on risk Jen.. it stresses how inspite of the dangers.. there exudes an elegance & passion in the risk taken by a braveheart soul... its such innate virtue of a truuthful simplistic heart that is a cosmic grandeur... a sterling vo=iz & comp entry ..best for you, light & love adored One x:)
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Re. Risk
2nd Jun 2020 11:23am
Love the visual shape of the poem and the inspiring message of this brave high wire walker.
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Re. Risk
6th Jun 2020 3:34am
I love this picture, I've often compared life to a tightrope walk, but never imagined it on tiptoes. That is true risk, and pure faith, nice entry :)
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Re. Risk
6th Jun 2020 6:26am
Dear J,
Stunning piece with picture to support. Risk. By definition risk makes me sweat. I really only like a sure thing but so true you pen “She is singular and her sequins Gold” not taking risk is lost opportunity for some amazing adventures. I adore how you write this. H🌷
Stunning piece with picture to support. Risk. By definition risk makes me sweat. I really only like a sure thing but so true you pen “She is singular and her sequins Gold” not taking risk is lost opportunity for some amazing adventures. I adore how you write this. H🌷
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6th Jun 2020 10:31am
Re. Risk
24th Sep 2020 11:14pm
Amazing finesse. And we dare think the umbrella is like a parachute..........Skill, guts.
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