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To Find the Moon Forever Lost
I never thought a day might come,
When everything I felt should last
To never ask where they came from,
So quickly turn into the past.
And not just what was yesterday
In my own little land of thought,
My memories weren’t meant to stray
Reminders of what I was taught.
For still I have this wanderlust
To covet and yet sacrifice.
Why shrinking life of only just
A precious few down to one vice.
What kind of messages to send,
The future beats an empty drum
For those of us who see no end;
The darkest winter yet to come.
I’ll never last without the rain,
To burrow in when comes the frost.
My anxious breath misting the pane
To find the moon forever lost.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 24th May 2020
| Edited 28th Aug 2020
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Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th May 2020 12:00pm
Wow, this provokes many thoughts and feelings. So many in fact it’s hard to focus. It has the desired effect.
Very well written Jade!
Very well written Jade!
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Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
I’m both honored & humbled by your kind words, dear Poet, with my thanks.🙏🏻
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th May 2020 12:51pm
Very inspiring and uplifting words to describe the feeling of understanding of what the moon and winter can bring even in an pandemic nicely composed dear poetess..respect
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Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
Thank you, brother Stoney 🙏🏻
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th Sep 2020 1:45pm
I understand wholeheartedly how it feels when your under the raw and uncut emotions and feelings just glad to see and hear from you again through this transformation of life's experiences with this pandemic take care of thyself respect dear poetess wink with a smile 🤗🙏😎😆😆😆
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Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th Sep 2020 8:28am
Thank you 🙏🏻
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
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Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th Sep 2020 8:30am
Thank you so much for this 🙏🏻
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
25th May 2020 3:33pm
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I bow to you, Tommy. Missing you, and hope you are safe.
Thought I’d try to leave a few replies to the kind comments received. You know how it’s been, and of my limits.
Your tiger🐯
Thought I’d try to leave a few replies to the kind comments received. You know how it’s been, and of my limits.
Your tiger🐯
Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
26th May 2020 00:28am
Oh Ms. Jade, excellent rhythm and rhyme. It's such an endearing piece, how this is bathed in moonbeams through each stanza. Excellent entry. Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th Sep 2020 8:41am
Thank you for this, Wally 🙏🏻
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th Sep 2020 5:11pm
Ms. Jade, it's always a joy to read your work. I hope you are recovering nice and well.
Take care.
Take care.
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Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
13th Jul 2020 9:11am
"my own little land of thought" ... nice line ... well poeted my dear poetess ...
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Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th Sep 2020 8:43am
Thank you, Lil’D 🙏🏻
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Apologies for the long time before my reply. Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
Anonymous
28th Aug 2020 10:23pm
You are the best!!! ***
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24th Sep 2020 8:44am
Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
20th Sep 2020 9:14am
Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th Sep 2020 8:52am
Dear Faith,
You are so kind, much too kind. I’m glad we’ve been in touch.🙏🏻
Much respect
Jade
You are so kind, much too kind. I’m glad we’ve been in touch.🙏🏻
Much respect
Jade
Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
Anonymous
21st Sep 2020 9:32am
It's always such a treat when you read a good rhyming piece, this is beautiful 🌹
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24th Sep 2020 8:46am
Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
22nd Sep 2020 10:24am
Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
Thank you for this, NB🙏🏻
Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Due to illness due to the pandemic, I have very little strength. Other than this explanation, my comments will be brief and few. I hope you understand.
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Re: Re. To Find the Moon Forever Lost
24th Sep 2020 8:42am
I understand, and am sorry to hear. *hugs* get better soon, okay?
Love,
--NewB
Love,
--NewB
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