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casual
you should know by now
I care more than I'll admit
don't believe my crap
I care more than I'll admit
don't believe my crap
Published 21st May 2020
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21st May 2020 2:21pm
I think we are all like that to a certain degree, Titanium. You're the first person I've read to put it so succinctly.
24th May 2020 2:47am
What I enjoy about haiku (or whatever you call this) is the challenge of making every syllable count. Thank you!
21st May 2020 2:59pm
I’m probably the opposite of this, truthfully. I care less than I put on. We all wear masks. Some are just better capable than others of admitting it and peeling it away from time to time.
Excellent truth spill.
Excellent truth spill.
24th May 2020 2:51am
One of the moments I learned the most about myself was when a dear friend called me on my tough act.... I had even convinced myself. It was strangely comforting.
Thanks!
Thanks!
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21st May 2020 3:33pm
Nice poeting here ... powerful ... crisp ... the way I like my poetry ...
24th May 2020 2:53am
