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Alphabet of Emotions
ANNOYED
with words you cite
BITCHING
I am never right
COURAGE
I need for flight
DESTROYED
by the constant fight
ETERNAL
no end in sight
FRUSTRATED
you were not my knight
GRATITUDE
never my delight
HATRED
it's what you ignite
INJUSTICE
you serve with might
JADED
won't trust outright
KNOWLEDGE
I have insight
LIFELESS
there is no excite
MUTILATED
by your rabid bite
NAIVE
you were not forthright
OSTRACIZED
never held tight
PATRONIZED
every single night
QUARANTINED
like I am your fright
RAGEFULL
you're never polite
STUPID
loving you despite
TRUSTING
it's never alright
UNDERSTANDING
not even quite
VAGUE
you would be in spite
WANTING
history to rewrite
XENIAL
never the slight
YESTERDAY
I saw the light
ZERO
tolerance tonight
with words you cite
BITCHING
I am never right
COURAGE
I need for flight
DESTROYED
by the constant fight
ETERNAL
no end in sight
FRUSTRATED
you were not my knight
GRATITUDE
never my delight
HATRED
it's what you ignite
INJUSTICE
you serve with might
JADED
won't trust outright
KNOWLEDGE
I have insight
LIFELESS
there is no excite
MUTILATED
by your rabid bite
NAIVE
you were not forthright
OSTRACIZED
never held tight
PATRONIZED
every single night
QUARANTINED
like I am your fright
RAGEFULL
you're never polite
STUPID
loving you despite
TRUSTING
it's never alright
UNDERSTANDING
not even quite
VAGUE
you would be in spite
WANTING
history to rewrite
XENIAL
never the slight
YESTERDAY
I saw the light
ZERO
tolerance tonight
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Clever :)
16th Jan 2012 1:30am
YESTERDAY
I saw the light
ZERO
tolerance tonight
I love that, this whole piece is so lovely in its simplicity and starkness! Adoration :)
I saw the light
ZERO
tolerance tonight
I love that, this whole piece is so lovely in its simplicity and starkness! Adoration :)
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re: Clever :)
Rachel
16th Jan 2012 2:06am
The flow from A to Z makes perfect sense.
I expect nothing less from you.
Hugs and cheers to you.
I expect nothing less from you.
Hugs and cheers to you.
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re: Rachel
16th Jan 2012 3:07am
Flawless:D
16th Jan 2012 4:12am
I love how the poem flowed flawlessly from A to Z. This was indeed beautifully written... I have loved all the poems I've read that were written by you.
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re: Flawless:D
16th Jan 2012 4:38am
wow
Anonymous
16th Jan 2012 7:10am
this is just Fabulous from A to Z!!! It is such a smooth ride...you rock, Great Write ;)
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re: wow
16th Jan 2012 7:15am
now I know my ABCzzzzzzz...
16th Jan 2012 9:15pm
OK, so now that you've done the alphabet, let's see you do numbers from 1 to infinity, and beeeyooooond... HA! That'll take you forever.
Very good, I was wondering what X was going to be.
Very good, I was wondering what X was going to be.
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re: now I know my ABCzzzzzzz...
I am so glad I could help you with that. :)
I think I just might do a numbers one next. I may cheat a little to get to the infinity though.
Yes, X took the longest to come up with, though not as long as I thought it would take.
Thanks for comment! :)
I think I just might do a numbers one next. I may cheat a little to get to the infinity though.
Yes, X took the longest to come up with, though not as long as I thought it would take.
Thanks for comment! :)
you mastered this
Anonymous
17th Jan 2012 3:54am
I saw first saw this in the competition - one would be foolish to even enter it thinking that they could mess with this poem - sometimes you say to oneself - whew - that is one special piece - and you have got that here in this one - well done - I tip my hat to you - ^v^
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re: you mastered this
17th Jan 2012 4:13am
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Anonymous
18th Jan 2012 9:09pm
amazing read,well done!
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re: ...
18th Jan 2012 10:21pm
Thank you mememe! Always a pleasure getting a read and a comment from you. :)
encore.....
19th Jan 2012 9:39pm
a bitter cohersion destroys empathy faithfully guided higher in just knowledge....lets me never overendulge personal righteousness systematically through underachievement....vanquish x-rays yonder zion....
ur poem is amazing & inspiring....i hope u like the 26 words it inspired n me....;)
ur poem is amazing & inspiring....i hope u like the 26 words it inspired n me....;)
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re: encore.....
19th Jan 2012 11:17pm
WOW! That is THE BEST comment I have EVER received...EVER!
Thank you for the compliment. :)
Thank you for the compliment. :)
:D
22nd Jan 2012 8:05pm
re: :D
23rd Jan 2012 4:12am
:p
24th Jan 2012 6:27am
re: :p
24th Jan 2012 6:40am
Brill!
23rd Mar 2012 12:10pm
Everything about this is perfection. I love it. Probably one of the best things I've ever read. You are a fantastic writer.
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re: Brill!
23rd Mar 2012 4:11pm
Alphabet of Emotions
19th Apr 2012 4:09am
Yooooo, this just has me on edge, this was ver well written especially the rhyme scheme I think I might cry ;~;
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re: Alphabet of Emotions
19th Apr 2012 4:48am
Ohhh nooo, don't cry, lol...I am so not good with crying people :P
A great compliment though...thank you so much!
A great compliment though...thank you so much!
Clever
Anonymous
3rd May 2012 4:10pm
What a cool poem. I have read many of yours. Your talent is endless. :)
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re: Clever
3rd May 2012 4:57pm
Oh my! Thank you so much. That is a fantastic compliment and it means a lot to me! :D