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Where Did the Fire of Love Go?
We had a good affair when it started
Love made us a happy couple
It’s a short time since we fell in love,
Yet we want to separate now
Where’s the ardour we once felt?
Where did the fire of love go?
The feeling isn’t the same as before
You and I no longer see eye to eye
We’re not in love with each other anymore
Something went wrong somewhere along the line
I’m not the man you once cherished
You’re not the woman I once admired
Darling, what has changed us?
Why should we look for a new love?
Love made us a happy couple
It’s a short time since we fell in love,
Yet we want to separate now
Where’s the ardour we once felt?
Where did the fire of love go?
The feeling isn’t the same as before
You and I no longer see eye to eye
We’re not in love with each other anymore
Something went wrong somewhere along the line
I’m not the man you once cherished
You’re not the woman I once admired
Darling, what has changed us?
Why should we look for a new love?
Published 19th May 2020
| Edited 13th Aug 2024
Author's Note
Many relationships don't last a long time.
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19th May 2020 00:21am
Many relationships don't last a long time.
This footnote, in my opinion will only apply to those who do not put their heart and effort into making it last; ready to leave when occurrences unbeknown happen, and neither party is willing to weather the storm, not many my love, but some. I applaud this poem sometimes in life we can teach, and there are times in life, when we have to preach.. nice ink spill my poet
This footnote, in my opinion will only apply to those who do not put their heart and effort into making it last; ready to leave when occurrences unbeknown happen, and neither party is willing to weather the storm, not many my love, but some. I applaud this poem sometimes in life we can teach, and there are times in life, when we have to preach.. nice ink spill my poet
19th May 2020 3:10am
