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May 15th, 10:03am
Drowning in my grief
Phasing in and out of my numbness
I can't seem to get control of my tears
Nothing is normal, you died far too young
My brain can't wrap itself around an existence
Without your smile, your hugs, your auntie advise
I just don't know what to do with this pain
Phasing in and out of my numbness
I can't seem to get control of my tears
Nothing is normal, you died far too young
My brain can't wrap itself around an existence
Without your smile, your hugs, your auntie advise
I just don't know what to do with this pain
Published 15th May 2020
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15th May 2020 10:29pm
I am sorry for your loss. The memories are always in your heart. I'm here to listen. Keep on writing.
19th May 2020 2:14am
It's a very difficult thing that you are going through right now, BlueBeast. No one can pretend that it isn't.
Your heart aches a dull ache which won't go away. Hell, we are given life, ultimately condemned to death the moment we are born. I will say this, however. It's what we do with our life that counts.
I do my best to find happiness where I can but the older I get, the narrower the margins.
Your heart aches a dull ache which won't go away. Hell, we are given life, ultimately condemned to death the moment we are born. I will say this, however. It's what we do with our life that counts.
I do my best to find happiness where I can but the older I get, the narrower the margins.
19th May 2020 6:43am
21st May 2020 3:19am
My condolences to you and your family Blue. I hope cherished memories bring you some comfort.
