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The author encourages honest critique.
13th May 2020 10:24pm
Favourite iines (sum up the cycle of sex):
That look of youth that led to love
Those novice thrusts that led to life.
That look of youth that led to love
Those novice thrusts that led to life.
You treat the person with respect and kindness and they will give you the world. Keep on writing.
14th May 2020 12:40pm
