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Moonlight Gaiety.....
As we venture 'neath
the lambent
of a cerulean colored welkin,
whisper me tender;
sweet midnight vespers
To thine eyes only
and sacred cosmos above,
unveil each arc of ivory
and raw sanguine
that aches;
outward arching
for the carress of Eros,
rapture singeing
ethereal hymns in flesh.
From twilight hours
of shimmering rim,
'til sun's first ray to crest;
'neath a full moon's glimmer
and glint,
tethered and 'twined,
blessed be this night;
our Elysium tryst.
the lambent
of a cerulean colored welkin,
whisper me tender;
sweet midnight vespers
To thine eyes only
and sacred cosmos above,
unveil each arc of ivory
and raw sanguine
that aches;
outward arching
for the carress of Eros,
rapture singeing
ethereal hymns in flesh.
From twilight hours
of shimmering rim,
'til sun's first ray to crest;
'neath a full moon's glimmer
and glint,
tethered and 'twined,
blessed be this night;
our Elysium tryst.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 11th May 2020
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
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Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
11th May 2020 11:54pm
Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
12th May 2020 00:08am
Love this piece so beautifully written with the aura of the moon.. Respect dear poetess
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The add and lovely words were appreciated muchly, dearest Stoney.
Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
12th May 2020 6:09am
your penned words taken deep in the mind and shine as the moon beam fills the heart
beautiful lines not lost your touch
beautiful lines not lost your touch
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12th May 2020 2:47pm
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13th May 2020 4:25am
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12th May 2020 7:15pm
Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
13th May 2020 1:33am
That was beautiful, Pandora... With magical, ethereal vibes. You're a great writer, and I love the gorgeous imagery you've painted for us here. It's wonderful, and you are divinely in tune. Really great writing...!
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Re: Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
13th May 2020 4:27am
I'm ever gracious of such kind words on this and the presence on your RL!!
Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
13th May 2020 5:01am
A song Byronesque in its lyrical passion that strokes my heart strings with a melody heaven sent. Your vast word knowledge is elevated beyond diction into a language of love taken into divinity. A sensual delight sweet as ice cream in July.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
13th May 2020 5:33pm
Your comments slay me. I appreciate them with such sincerity you always offer, John. Ever grateful and humbled, the best fan one could ask for. xx
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Anonymous
13th May 2020 2:05pm
I had to capture this beauty for my list and then had to dash out without time for comment. I apologize for the delay/ You know this moonchild will always fall rapt to knees for beauty such as this. Such a timeless feel to it, both ancient and newborn. Like making love neath Her silvered gaze. So enticing and sigh-worthy.... Endless hugs from the middle of nowhere for your
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Re: Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
13th May 2020 5:35pm
Thank you, appreciate the hugs. No biggie, it's just a lonesome place and growing trend anymore.
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13th May 2020 7:54pm
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Re: Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
22nd May 2020 9:51pm
Thanks for the appreciation, sweetpea! And the RL add on my other one too.❤
I need to visit you, and will today. I'm so rarely here anymore to catch anything. Sigh.
I need to visit you, and will today. I'm so rarely here anymore to catch anything. Sigh.
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22nd May 2020 9:54pm
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1st Jun 2020 4:53pm
Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
1st Jun 2020 6:11am
It's a poem that feels timeless, classical and yet modern. It's surreal.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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Re: Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
1st Jun 2020 4:56pm
Thank you so much, Wally..what a wonderful comment! Thank you for also saving my other piece to your RL. I'm pretty sure you did. I need to get my bootie in gear, stick around here and come see you!
Re. Moonlight Gaiety.....
2nd Jun 2020 12:53pm
You have taken my breath away with this write... This is oh so, so beautiful... So elegant and magical!
Thank you so much for sharing this gem of a poem. 🌹
Thank you so much for sharing this gem of a poem. 🌹
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3rd Jun 2020 4:51am
You have humbled me with such words of praise. Thank you for reading me, I'm forever grateful for your appreciation. 💝