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Ideal Woman
Smoothly curvaceous slim; refined
Sharp and quick witted in the mind
Friendly; outgoing, vivacious; vibrant
Talks so much; is rarely silent.
Her knowledgeable wisdom absolute; profound
Comes up with insights that will astound,
Caring motherly looks after all;
No matter whether large or small
Finding my perfection
Success not dejection
Sharp and quick witted in the mind
Friendly; outgoing, vivacious; vibrant
Talks so much; is rarely silent.
Her knowledgeable wisdom absolute; profound
Comes up with insights that will astound,
Caring motherly looks after all;
No matter whether large or small
Finding my perfection
Success not dejection
Published 4th May 2020
| Edited 5th May 2020
Author's Note
Poem written in exactly 50 words without repeating any word
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15th May 2020 5:08am
12th May 2022 9:36pm
Good achievement of non-repetitions, when given exercise to say what one's would be there is often the tendency to repeat 'I want' and 'she/they must' etc.
