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20th Apr 2020 9:08pm
Another gorgeous display... a simple, yet incredibly beautiful visual combined with a poetic gem :)
Fantastic work, nomoth!!
Fantastic work, nomoth!!
20th Apr 2020 9:45pm
How twisting this reels NM!!!
It reads of acute detail to be sure, with Poetic deliverance!!!
Perfect fkn pic!!!
It reads of acute detail to be sure, with Poetic deliverance!!!
Perfect fkn pic!!!
22nd Apr 2020 6:55am
22nd Apr 2020 8:19pm
Anonymous
25th Apr 2020 9:38pm
This reminds me of a time a few years back after I learned of a death.
I was sat in the car with my Husband in a car wash as I sat holding the radio aerial on my lap. I kept noticing a piece of dust in the corner of the air vent as the air-con was on, and for some reason it’s all
I could think of in the midst of the tears. And I’m not sure where the car wash began and the tears ended. But it’s all I remember.
Anyway, this poem reminded me of that time. There’s something surreal about it that reminds me of another place and time. Thank you for sharing.
-M
I was sat in the car with my Husband in a car wash as I sat holding the radio aerial on my lap. I kept noticing a piece of dust in the corner of the air vent as the air-con was on, and for some reason it’s all
I could think of in the midst of the tears. And I’m not sure where the car wash began and the tears ended. But it’s all I remember.
Anyway, this poem reminded me of that time. There’s something surreal about it that reminds me of another place and time. Thank you for sharing.
-M
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Jun 2020 5:45pm
24th May 2020 9:37pm
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