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La Passione
she arche(r)s her back
into the shape of a bow
—our bodies quiver
into the shape of a bow
—our bodies quiver
Author's Note
A clever, and lightly sensual senryu. Written late last night :)
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"The Dizionario Affettivo della Lingua Italians (Emotional Dictionary of the Italian Language) describes la passione as a flammable material—volatile and dangerous. When it possesses you, it causes infinitesimal, voracious particles to pulsate in the blood. You risk burning like a torch, flaming bright, and then disintegrating into embers. When you are inside la passione, nothing else can enter your mind. When it flees, you search desperately for more. Passion—and passion alone—lifts us above the ordinary. Without passion, there would be no literature, no art, no music, no romance, perhaps none of the wonders Italians have wrought."
From http://diannehales.com/what-is-la-passione/
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"The Dizionario Affettivo della Lingua Italians (Emotional Dictionary of the Italian Language) describes la passione as a flammable material—volatile and dangerous. When it possesses you, it causes infinitesimal, voracious particles to pulsate in the blood. You risk burning like a torch, flaming bright, and then disintegrating into embers. When you are inside la passione, nothing else can enter your mind. When it flees, you search desperately for more. Passion—and passion alone—lifts us above the ordinary. Without passion, there would be no literature, no art, no music, no romance, perhaps none of the wonders Italians have wrought."
From http://diannehales.com/what-is-la-passione/
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Re. La Passione
20th Apr 2020 00:33am
Nice lil one.
I thought oohhh NewB went Italian " mamma mia" molto buona.✨✨😉
I thought oohhh NewB went Italian " mamma mia" molto buona.✨✨😉
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Re: Re. La Passione
21st Apr 2020 8:49pm
Thanks so much, Poetic_Strength :)
I knew I wanted it to be love or passion related, and I thought "Heck, the last was in French, why not... I never intended to write anything erotic, but while writing the other night, I saw the chance at some wordplay that I couldn't resist! I thought about incorporating this into the poem I was writing at the time, but eventually decided to give it its own spotlight.
Your comment made me smile. I appreciate you stopping in again :)
I knew I wanted it to be love or passion related, and I thought "Heck, the last was in French, why not... I never intended to write anything erotic, but while writing the other night, I saw the chance at some wordplay that I couldn't resist! I thought about incorporating this into the poem I was writing at the time, but eventually decided to give it its own spotlight.
Your comment made me smile. I appreciate you stopping in again :)
Re. La Passione
20th Apr 2020 00:35am
Re: Re. La Passione
21st Apr 2020 8:50pm
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for your continued readership and support, Tired_and_Dreamy :)
Re. La Passione
20th Apr 2020 1:33am
dearest NB hot sensual and deeply lust filled write
a true beauty must be the muse...
passionate write ❤
a true beauty must be the muse...
passionate write ❤
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20th Apr 2020 3:08am
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Re. La Passione
Anonymous
20th Apr 2020 1:57pm
Nice one! Very memorable for your language play.
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21st Apr 2020 5:16pm
Re. La Passione
22nd Apr 2020 6:33am
Short but so sweet. No doubt the arrow pierced the heart in a most sensual manner !
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22nd Apr 2020 9:58am
Re. La Passione
23rd Apr 2020 2:10pm
Gotta honest, while the piece was VERY GOOD, I loved ur author’s notes more, simply becuz the subject of passion, I wholeheartedly believe/feel
to the depths of my soul...
to the depths of my soul...
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Re. La Passione
Anonymous
5th Jun 2020 8:48am
Archer , bow n quiver
Wow! I love the word play here...
Wow! I love the word play here...
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