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Let Distancing Become A Dance
And here the dust of wine & rose
Lies soft across our bed
Let distancing become a dance
That we two lovers wed
As naked each in darkest touch
Eyes lowered in a trance
The offerings of passion made
As we begin to dance
In pallid arms exchanging sighs
As we embrace the night
I enter into solitude
Forsaking you in spite
But while I’m gone I writhe alone
Your shadow follows when
I fast for weeks the wine & rose
Until we dance again
Author's Note
Day 17 of 30
54 unique words of 83 total
Syllabic count per stanza: 8/6/8/6
54 unique words of 83 total
Syllabic count per stanza: 8/6/8/6
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17th Apr 2020 9:15am
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18th Apr 2020 3:12pm
O my friend, I’ve accidently injured one of my eyes so I must be brief. Thank you so very much for your inspired & wonderful comment!🙏🏻
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18th Apr 2020 2:12am
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18th Apr 2020 3:14pm
Dear Emily,
I’ve accidently injured one of my eyes so I must be brief. Thank you so very much for your thoughtful comment!🙏🏻
I’ve accidently injured one of my eyes so I must be brief. Thank you so very much for your thoughtful comment!🙏🏻
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18th Apr 2020 6:53pm
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Re. Let Distancing Become A Dance
19th Apr 2020 1:31am
"But while I’m gone I writhe alone" almost picture a silhouette aching.
Nicely done Ms. Jade.
Nicely done Ms. Jade.
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19th Apr 2020 3:43am
Ohh thank you, Wally, I’m aching even now from your beautiful description.
Re. Let Distancing Become A Dance
25th Apr 2020 6:22am
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25th Apr 2020 6:37am
Thank you for the read, poet, though there’s no hammer & it’s written as a Quatern, not prose.
(I’ve been enduring a painful eye injury since last Sunday during lockdown, so my replies/comments will have to be brief - just thought I’d explain)
(I’ve been enduring a painful eye injury since last Sunday during lockdown, so my replies/comments will have to be brief - just thought I’d explain)