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If I Learned One Thing Tonight
My daughter is amazing
18 wise years
She does know too much
fishbowl living
has it's perks, i guess
Although for sure
it's not the hang ups...
She can't help knowing
about a restless poison seed
A claim to itchy feet
She can't help that it's showing
what her old folks need..
It aint another blank
stare out the window
smokin on some weed
That's coping for kids
grownup reality is
we are well past coping
at a galloping need
For sanctified time
to unwind and retreat
What we need now
is a plain-old follow through
No more grandstanding
over inconvenient truths
The next time a mouth
opens to such effect
I splan to take her advice
Seriously, with great respect
Actual plans for break
times require
a resolute intellect
But if I learned one thing
it's that she's
become
...a great person
18 wise years
She does know too much
fishbowl living
has it's perks, i guess
Although for sure
it's not the hang ups...
She can't help knowing
about a restless poison seed
A claim to itchy feet
She can't help that it's showing
what her old folks need..
It aint another blank
stare out the window
smokin on some weed
That's coping for kids
grownup reality is
we are well past coping
at a galloping need
For sanctified time
to unwind and retreat
What we need now
is a plain-old follow through
No more grandstanding
over inconvenient truths
The next time a mouth
opens to such effect
I splan to take her advice
Seriously, with great respect
Actual plans for break
times require
a resolute intellect
But if I learned one thing
it's that she's
become
...a great person
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