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Never Quite Gone
Whispers from afar
Sullen memories like floating balloons
Hover in gentle breezes
There, never quite gone
Infinite shade of grey
Emotions bubbling under
Little tears trickle
Tiny streams staining skin
Slowly losing self
Fading behind noise
It cuts deep
Unreasonable doubt
Slicing through the faltering heart
Each beat a sob
That reveals soul
Published 14th Apr 2020
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#14 Of 30
Total Words: 53
Unique Words: 53
Total Words: 53
Unique Words: 53
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14th Apr 2020 2:43am
I feel your deep pain dearest poet
I have waves of doubt much akin to yours...
hugs ❤
I have waves of doubt much akin to yours...
hugs ❤
14th Apr 2020 2:43am
That was moving, Asperger... truly, you touched my heart with this spill :'(
Oh, man. I am at a loss for words at how you made me feel with this one...
You are a wonderful writer - what a genuinely passionate and expressive piece.
Oh, man. I am at a loss for words at how you made me feel with this one...
You are a wonderful writer - what a genuinely passionate and expressive piece.
14th Apr 2020 4:40am
" Sullen memories like floating balloons " <<---Wow! So good!
this has a slow moving quiet feel to it which provides the reader with time to catch up to the emotions
this has a slow moving quiet feel to it which provides the reader with time to catch up to the emotions
