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Just Like Fight Club
We don't talk about
NaPoWriMo
Not just because
it's a mouthful
Do you want your
little world to know
Let your inner
village heretic glow
is it a burn or a roast
an errant attempt
to raise a toast
Who will care
unless the
flicker grows
that wicked flame
beneath your toes
The will of others
applied together
threefold or more...
binding you
in your place?
..Anyways
that's just
how it goes...
NaPoWriMo
Not just because
it's a mouthful
Do you want your
little world to know
Let your inner
village heretic glow
is it a burn or a roast
an errant attempt
to raise a toast
Who will care
unless the
flicker grows
that wicked flame
beneath your toes
The will of others
applied together
threefold or more...
binding you
in your place?
..Anyways
that's just
how it goes...
Written by
EdibleWords
Published 13th Apr 2020
Author's Note
Inspired by the song "7 Nation Army" by the White Stripes
AND
the movie
Fight Club
AND
the movie
Fight Club
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Just Like Fight Club
13th Apr 2020 8:05am
I guess there is shit people don't talk like fight club. Great poem. Keep on writing.
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Re. Just Like Fight Club
13th Apr 2020 3:33pm
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If I'm still married next April... I won't be allowed to repeat it... not unless I play dirty and write in secret. Something I'm not willing actually, to do.
So I choose...
I choose to write poetry. And to be loved for it.
Don't want you to think i push it abnormally much... I don't, actually.
Not that I've never made mistakes...
So I choose...
I choose to write poetry. And to be loved for it.
Don't want you to think i push it abnormally much... I don't, actually.
Not that I've never made mistakes...
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13th Apr 2020 6:55pm
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14th Apr 2020 8:35am
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13th Apr 2020 10:22pm
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13th Apr 2020 11:02pm
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Re. Just Like Fight Club
14th Apr 2020 12:01pm
The rhyme scheme is on another level...
Why didn't I ever write this over before...
It's well balanced and perfect
Why didn't I ever write this over before...
It's well balanced and perfect
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